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Reviewer: scarlett Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/05 07:55 am Title: Safety First

it's okay. i love the challenge in this story. i definitely loved A/U :D :D that's why i was hooked on this, and i always anticipated the next chapters :D

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: scarlett Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/05 11:33 pm Title: Safety First

HAHAHAHA. i was laughing out loud here about that last one. Mothers! And Cassie had to remind Oriana about brith control pills in front of Howie! whew! good one. and i like the concern on Kevin's part, although I can't still imagine him as Brian and Alex's father. But that's okay. It never made me love this story any less... :D :D :D

Author's Response: Mothers are definitely a special breed! Though, we're sorry that you can't imagine Kevin as Alex and Brian's father. We wanted a very different combo from what you're used to seeing. And since Kevin was the oldest... We just liked the combination.

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/05 11:00 pm Title: Safety First

aww....what a place to leave off....but so fricken hilarioius! Wow...they are all something else. I hope that Kevy can win Oriana's trust....he sees something that nobody else does....that something is totally wrong. HOwie and Ori definitely both seemed humiliated beyond what is normal. Poor people! lol. Great job and please please update soon!

Author's Response: Glad you noted something was wrong. And, we think that we'd all be humiliated beyond what is normal if we were Oriana and Howie. Oh the cruel tortures of being able to craft a story with the trusty pen!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/05 05:09 am Title: Safety First

LMAO! LOVEDwhen Oriana bounced off the door! I've actually bounced off the corner of a wall before while walking in the dark, midst eating a Nutri-grain cereal bar thing-lol. And I LOVED the whole "Because I can see three of you..." SO Funny! LMAO!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!! ~Lenni~

Author's Response: We think your initial problem with bouncing off the corner of the wall was walking in the dark and eating at the same time. Quite the dangerous combo. But, we're glad you found it hilarious!