[Report This]Date: 12/07/04 07:10 pm Title: Superman
I can what a jerk and I hope it would not pass from being only mennancing words no actual actions on what Brian said he was going to do to Ori.
And I hope when Ori and Howie chat she can be his nurse and somehow she gets the heads up on his past as well as brian's plans. but I pty Aj he is in the middle of all of it. Whoa! I cannot wait for the other chapter I want more plz! hehehe.
Author's Response: Alex is definitely in the middle of the entire mess and you'll get more this weekend. Promise.
[Report This]Date: 12/06/04 06:25 am Title: Superman
Lmao! Teags & Brian are SO cute & SO funny together. It's such a shame that he's such an ass towards Ori.
And also, I WISH Howie HAD listened to Alex! He's gonna scare the shit outta Ori, then lose her for good 'cause of stupidity & by letting what Brian said get to him - though it should, he does NOT have to go see Ori & share her senseless with his actions! Dammit Howie! LISTEN TO ALEX FOR ONCE!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Starry's quite proud to know that you find Teags and Brian to be quite cute together. They are a picture of perfection. And, you never know about Howie... Just have to wait for that next chapter I suppose...
[Report This]Date: 11/17/04 04:40 am Title: Bitter Blackmail
I'm really hating Brian with passion he need a realitic check. And I guess his butt kick again by Ori hehehe. I didn't like one bit the confratation that B the monter and Howie. I felt everything that Howie felt. darn you are good but now give me more than this don't be cruel I want more Howie + Ori plz atleast two chapter of them hehehe.
Author's Response: I think the aim of the game is to hate Brian. And I'm glad that you felt everything that Howie was feeling. Guess it makes our job a little easier. And we will deliver Ori and Howie, we promise. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 11/17/04 04:15 am Title: Bitter Blackmail
wow hehehe this fic is really getting good. Brian is such an asshole though! I love Alex and Oriana together lol....lepord print room with weird green carpet...*dies at image* So very Alex hehehe. Teagan though...how can she date Bri, I know he's cute but...
anywho, hehe update soon! I love it and Ana you know I've always been a fan of your stuff, whether your collaborating or writing it solo.
*Rose*
Author's Response: Rosie~Posie! I haven't spoken to you in forever. Would you at least drop me an email or something? Jezz, I miss you! And thanks for the review, Cocci and I appreciate it. I'm glad you're enjoying my stuff, even if it isn't bathed in blood like the regular mayhem. Of course, co-writing tends to be a bit more gentle *pets Cocci* *purrs* Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 11/17/04 03:48 am Title: Self-Conscious Memories
I hope Aj don't become a rock in the road between Ori and Howie. Specially when Howie haved worked very hard to get Ori. Glad to be reading this story i love it i can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Alex is going to become Oriana's step-brother, so don't worry, he won't be developing any romantic interests in her. We're not V.C. Andrews (wonderful author by the way, love her stuff). And thank you for reading!
[Report This]Date: 11/17/04 03:12 am Title: Bitter Blackmail
LMAO!!! Alex & Ori are real characters together! *giggles* I'm SO glad they get along so well! *grns*
Now, I NEVER thought I'd see the day I say this, but.....BRIAN'S A FLIPPIN' ASSHOLE!!!!! How DARE he threaten Howie & Ori like that!!!! How DARE he!!!! I hope Kevin finds out & gives Brian the lickin' of his life!!!! Yeesh!
UPDATE!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Ori and Alex are from the same mold, huh? You'll have plenty of more entertainment from them, trust me. And it's interesting to see characters protrayed in different ways. Brian couldn't always be the Bible-Boy forever, could he?
[Report This]Date: 11/17/04 03:02 am Title: Bitter Blackmail
Man alive! I'm enjoying this story. Although, that was about 20 too many f-words for my liking. Keep this up, I really need to see where this goes!
Author's Response: Man alive? Not sure I've heard that expression before. But totally do-able. And I know the swearing is a little much, but if you go into a high school scene or college scene for that matter, you're going to get a lot of cursing. It expresses the characters in ways 'by golly' and 'darn it' just don't cut. Sorry if it's too profain, but it's meant for a purpose.
[Report This]Date: 11/11/04 12:43 pm Title: Self-Conscious Memories
sounds like Oriana and Howie both have haunting pasts. Hopefully when/if they find out from each other about their pasts, it wont ruin what they're gaining with eachother. Great chapter!!! Loving the story
Author's Response: Glad that you're loving the story. Means a lot to us! And we have plenty of fun planned, trust me.
[Report This]Date: 11/09/04 02:12 am Title: Self-Conscious Memories
Lmao! AJ's gonna be SO over-proective of her! Lol. N I bet he's right about her team-mates 2!
GO AJ! GO HOWIE!
UPDATE!!!!
~Lenni~
pEaCe!
Author's Response: Go Howie? Go AJ? Woohoo! Okay! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 10/16/04 01:03 am Title: Weaving Intentions
Man that Brian had a very dirty mouth. But it was intense that sence it was great I love it though.
Also That was intense between Howie and Ori. But what happen in the past stay in the past I hope that doesn't come back to bite him about Christina.
But darn why the new happy family had to get together for that night when Howie and Ori are going to hang out together. I hope they had fun and crazy and steammy one lol!
I just hope that I don't have to wait to long for it plz pretty plz lol!
Author's Response: Thank you from both of us! And another chapter will be out soon, I promise.
[Report This]Date: 10/13/04 05:03 am Title: Weaving Intentions
Man, Brian's got a stick shoved far up his butt hole. He's being a brat. I was reading your response to one of the other reviews and it is amusing to see the different take on Brian's character as opposed to the normal bible boy. You guys are doing a really good job on this. Keep up the good work and update soon! [Alex]
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. And yeah, Brian's a brat. Gotta love it.
[Report This]Date: 10/11/04 08:23 pm Title: Weaving Intentions
At least Howie and AJ get alone good...they sure did have an in depth convo about Oriana. Hopefully she wont freak when she finds out about Christina. I wonder if Teag will talk some sense in to Brian and make him realize that Oriana is awesome. If not...things wont end well!
Author's Response: Gotta give Howie and AJ the best friend title, right? Only seems fair! And, let's just say, that why would we want things to end well? Let's cause chaos! Thanks for the review, Starry Eyes and I love you!
[Report This]Date: 10/11/04 03:27 am Title: Weaving Intentions
Lmao! AJ & Howie are SO funny together! Lol. Cute chapter - liked it. Hehe. More Brian-*grins cheesily*-even if he IS an ass in this. Lol.
UPDATE!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: So, yeah, decided I really like the idea of responding to all my reviews. It's a nice little treat for the reader I suppose, which is compliments of Mare. But, thanks for the review, Starry Eyes and I really appreciate it. And you will be getting a lot more of Brian, trust me. And you gotta love the asshole Brian. Quite amusing change from the Bible Boy.
[Report This]Date: 10/04/04 09:27 pm Title: A Birthday Kiss
Hey about time whao! they kiss not once but twice and a try lol! That was sweet, I cannot wait now for their talk. Because he went all out there with the gifts to win her over and I guess he didn't need that cause Ori she need only a push that I bet that Teg would made sure she give her the push you know she is bussy body but you got to love her because she is right in the money. And like I said before I cannot wait for their talk that would be intresting with uncontrolable hormones going around lol!
[Report This]Date: 10/03/04 01:18 pm Title: A Birthday Kiss
wow...Oriana really loved Howie's gifts. And now its out in the open...she got some feelings for him! and he knows it! lol..gotta love thinking thoughts aloud! hehe,,,hopefully it gets acted upon! great chapter!!!
