[Report This]Date: 10/03/04 04:21 am Title: A Birthday Kiss
Well, dude! Homeboy got it goin' on! I'd say that kiss in itself would be a freakin' sweet birthday present. It's a good thing Homeboy and Ori are starting to click. They'll make a good pair. Keep up the good work and update soon! [Alex]
[Report This]Date: 10/03/04 03:49 am Title: A Birthday Kiss
LMAO! LOVED the end of the chapter where she mumbles aloud to herself! I do that ALL the damned time! Lol. And YAY HOWIE!!! HE GOT HIS KISS!!!! *happy dance* UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!!!!!! ~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 10/03/04 02:27 am Title: A Birthday Kiss
ROFL! I was waiting for all this to happen. Oriana and Brian's reactions to the news and each other are just like I thought it would be. I loved it. The Howie/Oriana scene was just adorable. Now, what can we expect out of Brian and Teagan?
[Report This]Date: 09/24/04 03:31 am Title: Bittersweet Birthday Cake
*ducks for cover* Yes, I would say the shit has DEFINITELY hit the fan. *does a dance* Man, this was the moment I have been waiting for. Brilliant, knew it would be completely dramatic. Gotta love it! You guys did a wonderful job. *walks away laughin* Stepsiblings...let's see how THAT works out...LoL [Alex]
[Report This]Date: 09/22/04 03:58 pm Title: Bittersweet Birthday Cake
Great chapter...wow..things surely turned sour when everything all came together...jeez! lol...and the marriage thing went over rather poorly. Although still curioius as to why Riana is so down on her mothers dating and all...was she raped or sexually tortured by ex's? Guess it'll all come out when the time is right. Hopefully she'll let Howie talk to her though so he can prove how sincier he really is.
[Report This]Date: 09/21/04 03:38 am Title: Bittersweet Birthday Cake
I want more you left me on the edge what a wicked witch lol! That was great hon I love the way they reacted it sounded very realistic. I just can wait to see if Ori let Howie console her and if things get back to the way the were on the room before her friends came to get her. And to see if she opens up to him about why she doesn't trust man to Howie. And in Brian case he needs to take a chill pill man what mouth lol! It was hilirious. But good for AJ and Ori I think they are going to be ok. Can i have more plz
[Report This]Date: 09/20/04 02:24 am Title: Bittersweet Birthday Cake
Damn. I KNEW Brian would spazz! Lol. But - thought he'd at least stay for cake. I mean, since it's free n all. Lol. Poor Oriana. Yeesh. Hope Howie can makes things better. N whatz crawled up everybody's asses n died? Yeesh! Well, know whatz up with Brian & partly with Ori - but, whatz the WHOLE story, huh? UPDATE!!!! ~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 09/15/04 12:08 pm Title: Oh So Close
Sounds like Oriana is actually softening to Howie....if only she could see how genuine he really is. THe chapter was so cute....and very funny. I really enjoyed it. Please update soon!!!
[Report This]Date: 09/15/04 03:22 am Title: Oh So Close
Hey is about time that Oriana open to him a bit , Howie is really trying his hardest to get to her but darn those boys that walking in in the most exciting and intresting part when he was finally geeting a kiss from her. I just Howie let go on the pool and play with her she wants to pay with him. It is his time he better not waste it and don't make her feel bad. hmmm what I just read that Howie might stay the night with her to hang out that I'll be intresting to read. Darn that Nick doesn't know who to used is words wisely and now its going to cost him hehe good for tega though. But now I understand a bit more why Ori has the attitude that she have. Good keep it coming I'm addictive lol!
[Report This]Date: 09/13/04 04:07 am Title: Oh So Close
LMAO!!!! SO funny! And GO HOWIE!!!! He FINALLY is getting SOMEwhere with her!!! Yee-hah!!! UPDATE A.S.A.P.!!!!! ~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 09/12/04 03:01 am Title: Oh So Close
Ooh, so Oriana decided to warm up to Homeboy a bit. That's a good thing, I'd have to say. Just wait until she recieves the gifts he bought her. I'm just anxious to see what's going to go down when Brian arrives. That should be interesting. Keep up the good work and update soon! [Alex]
[Report This]Date: 09/09/04 03:25 pm Title: A Chance For Love
I cannot believe that Teagan is head over heels for Brian...I hate to see what happens with him and RIana come face to face again with Teag around...sounds llike she's terrified of her ex, although who wouldnt be. Howie's gift was soooo sweet, and a surprise? I wonder what it is! Great chapter...update soon!
[Report This]Date: 09/09/04 01:29 am Title: A Chance For Love
LMAO! Just wait 'till Brian finds out who Teagan really is, and her him. lol. Should see some fireworks there. And I'm SO awaiting the birthday party! GO HOWIE! lol. UPDATE!!!!! ~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 09/08/04 11:52 pm Title: A Chance For Love
Man, go figure Brian and Teagan run into each other at the mall. I knew it was bound to happen! But I loved that it worked out that way, and of course they fall madly in love with each other right away. That'll only complicate things further on in the story which means MORE DRAMA! YES!!! *does a dance* And Xander? Man, the dude sounds like a real *censored words*. I have a feeling that isn't the only time he'll be making an appearance. But this chap was good. I liked it. Good job with making Homeboy out to be such a sweetheart (even though we all know he really is). Presents for the birthday girl to win her heart is always a good thing. Props Homeboy for getting a surf board. If it were me, I'd want a wake board. Mostly for the fact that I stick to lakes and have a liking for boats. And plus I ain't ever surfed, and don't probably plan on it, because knowing the first time I try it, I'll get eaten by a shark. So thank you very much, I'll stick to wakeboarding. Anyway, great chap, I'm enjoying the story. Keep up the great work! [Alex]
[Report This]Date: 09/06/04 12:19 am Title: Foolhardy Assumptions
poor Howie being turned down....I feel bad for him...but Oriana does sound like she's had a suck ass past to make her afraid to commit! Teagan and Howie's little argument was hilarious...and her freaking over her hair was priceless...nice touch! lol...especially the threats to spill the dirt on Howie to Oriana...loved the chapter. Please update soon!
