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Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/05 10:18 pm Title: A Chance for Magic

awww....Brian and Teags are so cute together...i hate to say...because we all know Brian is total SLIME! And what is Oriana's problem? Her and Howie were getting so close and now she is pushing him away? oh HELL NO...she better NOT! I swear, she better not ruin this amazing thing she has with him. And where is Nick? I havent heard anything on Nicky in like, forever! Great chapter....still got some catching up to do! lol

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/05 04:29 am Title: A Step Closer

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sweet chapter!!! LOVED the part with Ori & Kevin!!!!!!!!!! ~Lenni~

Reviewer: felicia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/05 02:36 am Title: A Step Closer

very good!!!

Reviewer: felicia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/05 01:49 pm Title: Knotting Loose Ends

awww....howie and brian are the sweetest boyfriends in the world :D

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/05 06:13 am Title: Knotting Loose Ends

Howie's just SOOO cute! As IF he didn't know how to unclasp a bra!!! I thought ALL guys could do THAT in their SLEEP!!!! Lol. not that I've met a guy whose ever unhooked MY bra - it'll be a LOONG time before THAT happens! Lol. And wow - Brian was sweeet - amazing, ain't it? UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! ~Lenni~

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/05 05:56 am Title: The Drag of Hangovers

LMAO!!!!!!!! People should NOT wake Riana while she's sleeping! Lol. GREAT chapter!!! I'm looking forward to more - as always! Lol. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 ~Lenni~

Reviewer: felicia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/05 12:31 am Title: The Drag of Hangovers

lmao....i loved the ending! great update!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/05 01:24 am Title: Beachside Confessionals

OMG.....beautiful chapter! I was SO dazed by it, I almsot forgot to reply to Felicia's email! lol. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! ~Lenni~

Reviewer: felicia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/05 03:41 pm Title: Beachside Confessionals

yay!!! great chapter! now i gotta work on my paper....booo lol

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/05 02:46 am Title: A Chance for Magic

Lmao! highly amused by this chapter! lol. UPDATE!!!! ~Lenni~

Reviewer: felicia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/05 12:30 pm Title: Girls Do It Too

oh! and i have a question for ya. are aj and brian twins? if not, how are both of them older than oriana and both seniors? lol

Author's Response: No, they're not twins, more like Irish Twins. We're assuming they're at least 9 months apart. Brian is the older brother, like the older kids in school that graduate when they're 18 or even 19. Alex is the younger brother, like the younger kids who graduates at 17 or 18. And, lucky me, I graduated when I was 17.

Reviewer: felicia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/05 09:51 pm Title: Vying for Attention

after three days (i lost count, so this is probably wrong lol) i finally finished this.....awesome story!!! you gotta update :D

Reviewer: Frackandbonechick / Michelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/05 12:24 pm Title: Vying for Attention

amazing, just amazing.... thats all i can say about this story....

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/05 03:32 am Title: Vying for Attention

wow...Howie is so sweet. god, I about cried because I dont thing guys like that even exist. He is amazing. The promise ring, the Duke thing....the promises of marriage and making love..its all just wow! *smiles* And Brian was pretty damn sweet too...but he only is to Teagan. I still think he is a complete ass wad, but he treats Teags good. He'd better not screw up her friendship with Ori..but I have a feeling that he will. Damn ass! Loved the chapter. Please update soon!

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/05 06:40 pm Title: Forced Freedom

GO ALEX!!!! Woohoo! It's a start....but dude, he shoulda paralyzed the fucker. I can't believe Brian....my God! Poor Oriana...on a positive note...Oriana was hilarious with the dress thing...I was laughing so hard!!! wow! hehehe. But Brian with Kevin...Kevin is about the sweetest, kindest father anybody could ask for. I wish Bri would appreciate him and Oriana would trust him. He's great. I want a step dad like that! Brian is such a jack ass. They should disown him or send him to be on the show Survivor...although he'd be first to go...or murdered...whichever coems first. Amazing chapter!