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Reviewer: Mandelyn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/05 01:30 pm Title: Vying for Attention

Wow, Brian can be such a dick! What the hell is his problem? Well, just waiting for the next update. Keep up the good work. I hope Brian and Oriana can make amends.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/05 02:59 am Title: Vying for Attention

Whoo-hoo! Camping!!!! GO HOWIE!!! GO HOWIE!!! IT'S YOUR BIRTHDAY!!! GO HOWIE!!!! lol. GO A.J.!!!!!! (he waved at me ltos too! hehe) UPDATE!!!!!!! ~Lenni~ p.s. all but howie waved - i saw him, but didn't think it wuz him-lol.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/05 02:57 am Title: Forced Freedom

LMAO!!!! A.J. is SO funny!!!!!!! FINALLY!!!! People are beating the shit outta Brian! Whoo-hoo!!! (ok, can't cheer TOo much - the man DID smile & wave at me TWICE at my concert! lol) UPDATE!!!!!!! ~Lenni~

Reviewer: Maggie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/05 02:07 am Title: Forced Freedom

Holy heck, that was a great chapter! That's really all I can say! Can't wait for the rest.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/05 02:17 pm Title: Sharing the Depths of His Heart

Howie's such a sweetheart! And those two kids - the ones Ori loves so much - they're adorable! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! ~Lenni~ P.S. *IF* they kick Brian off the team, he'll blame Ori - so, she'd best watch out.

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/05 04:43 pm Title: Sharing the Depths of His Heart

oh! and the promise ring thing...Howie is truly the sweetest thing ever. OMG am I jealous. I want a guy like Howie!!! And Ori is so falling head over heels for him! She deserves to be happy. She really does, and Howie does that for her! Truly amazing!

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/05 04:39 pm Title: Sharing the Depths of His Heart

awww...wow! what an awesome chapter! I was surprised that Brian was actually CIVIL towards Ori! But I doubt it will last! The center sounds awesome and Howie was so good with the kids. Corey and Catie are adorable! They sound so sweet. I truly loved the chapter. Please update soon., The story is great!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/05 08:12 pm Title: The Last Dance

Aww. Howie's SO sweet! And A.J. - oye vey. He need a girl? I'll be it! lol. UPDATE!!!!!! ~Lenni~ p.s. glad brian & teagan hooked up again.

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/05 07:14 pm Title: The Last Dance

Awww..Brian and Teags made up! As much of an ass that he is, Im glad that they did, strangely....and HOwie and Ria are adorable together. So he knwos about the rapes now of her mothrs past boyfriends? OUCH...but its good she trusts him with that. He's the perfect boyfriend. I wanna boyfriend like that! *sniffles* lol..well, kinda do, but he lives in Michigan practically. Hmm...lol. Oh well, amazng chapter!

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/05 06:48 pm Title: Not Just A Chance

such a great chapte! I can't believe Xav thoug...stupid ass fuck. God, Teags was so freaked out! Damn...I hope he doesnt come back, and HOwie better protect Oriana...and Teagen for that matter. Wow...What a rotten way to end such a fun night. Amazing job!!!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/17/05 03:18 am Title: Not Just A Chance

Aww. Poor Teags. I feel SO horrible for her! And damned good thing Alex has a BRAIN! lol. UPDATE!!!!!!!! ~Lenni~ P.S. Wish Brian would snap OUT of it & help save Teags & Ori!!!!!

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/05 01:39 pm Title: Taking A Stand

YAY! I'm caught up!!! I am so glad Teags and Brian split! I was laughing so hard at their hateful words...dildo and blow up doll! priceless!!! I hope they don't get back together, but Teags has finally seen Brian for what he truly is! Update soon!

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/05 01:25 pm Title: Spiteful Rewards

I can't believe Brian actually purpsoely ruined the plays because his ass is so damn egotistical. He's got enough testosterone in him for a whole city of fuck wads just like himself!!! And awww..Oriana is jealous!!! How sweet! Jealousy is always key! hehe...Howie better not fuck up and Luke better not try anything with Ori! I loved it!

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/05 12:55 am Title: Taking Sides

great chatpter...so at least Howie and Alex know and to look out for shit to happen. Brian still being an ass...damn..he needs to fall off of a cliff and if he doesnt die, become a quadraplegic!

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/05 12:56 am Title: Gluing the Broken Shards

such a great chapter!!! Ori and HOwie make the sweetest couple! I hope that Mac does not interfere in a bad way...stupid jock strap. I feel so bad that Oriana is so afraid of her mom though now. wow....Evil mommy! I loved the chapter!