[Report This]Date: 05/24/05 02:31 am Title: Developing Relationships
Aww. SO sweet! I LOVED when Howie kissed her to shut her up! And I *SO* LOVED Kevin in this chapter!!!!!! Whoo-hoo!!!! But somebody SERIUOSLY *NEEDS* to tell on Brian! The stupid dumb f*ck prick! And now Teagan's gonna hate Orianna all 'cause she needed Howie jyst once - did she even SEE Teagan to begin with?!?! Like, dude. If you're in LOTS of pain, you scream for the first person you see!!! YEESH!!!!!! F*CK 'EM!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: So, are you for or against Oriana's reaction when she broke her arm?
[Report This]Date: 05/23/05 10:38 pm Title: Developing Relationships
H3ey that was nice how a horrible thing bring out happy things . Like Kev and Ori o a nice little step and howie and her back together that is really nice.
Author's Response: True horror always tends to bind lovers together, especially in fan fiction. Haha.
[Report This]Date: 05/19/05 03:16 am Title: Knight in Shining Armor
Okay, here we go - AGAIN. I reviewed yesterday, but I guess my computer froze before it posted. Stupid thing. ANYWAYS..... *tackles Brian & beats shit outta him!!!!!!!* YOU NO GOOD %$^%&$%^$#%&^&%^$#%#$^#$!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *pried of Bri by Nick-backs off* Ok, O-K. Sorry! I just could *NOT* wait my turn *ANY* longer to beat the shit outta his sorry ass!!!! How the HELL he could hurt his SOON-TO-BE-*SISTER* like that is BEYOND me!!!!!!!!! STUPID $%#^&$#%#@%^!!!!!!!!!!! ARGH!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, & beat Xander's ass up 4 me 2, kay? Unless I'm 1st in line, then i'll GLADLY do it myself! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 05/16/05 02:05 am Title: Brotherly Love
Can you PLEASE do something to cool that prick off a.s.a.p.? I'm getting annoyed with his crummy attitude.
Author's Response: Which prick? Brian or Xander? Haha, thanks for the review and the heated expression over our characters. Makes us feel good to see people getting so connected.
[Report This]Date: 05/12/05 02:31 am Title: Brotherly Love
*haw hit floor* WTF!?!?! C'n I *PLEASE* kick Brian's no good ass? PLEASE!?!?!?! And that Bastard whose bugging Teagan too!!!!!!!! Damn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Sorry, all ass kicking of Brian goes through a series of numbers to each participant. You are currently ... Well... Maybe it's better if we just say we'll get back to you! *grin* Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 05/01/05 04:37 am Title: Friendly Advice
Dude! Brian is SUCH an asshole! & poor Howie! He doesn't even know wtf he did wrong! Yeesh! Oriana owes him an explination AT LEAST!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Definitely poor Howie, we agree that he does need an explanation. But, girls hardly ever deliver, huh?
[Report This]Date: 04/29/05 12:45 am Title: Dating Dilemmas
i love it, you know. that thing about mixing up brian's character. he's angelic face could be so deadly!
Author's Response: Maybe we should have had another title for the story! Good call!
[Report This]Date: 04/24/05 12:23 am Title: Dating Dilemmas
Hey gurlas, you have done yourselves here I love the story but oh no Ori and Howie I hope this little incident get fix, that ori realize that he was only playing and that she iniciated everything. Can I have more
Author's Response: Funny how girls over-exaggerate for good reasons, huh?
[Report This]Date: 04/22/05 08:10 am Title: Dating Dilemmas
since then, i'm beginning to have an idea about that part of Oriana's past, that's why how much she knew that kevin is a good guy for her Mom, she can't fully trust him. oh, i wish i could be her friend and soothe her worries and troubles even for just a while. i wish Howie could be able to help her in some sort of way to make her feel alright and take all those skeletons away.. :( on the first part of the Chapter, this is the story where i can really imagine Brian on the dark side, your writing is effective and it wanted me to hate but love his character at the same time. more please :D :D
Author's Response: Glad that Oriana's past is finally starting to make sense. It'll get a lot clearer as we progress through the story. And, glad that we're making a realistic portrayl of Brian being dark. Sometimes you want to mix up a character's personality but only end up screwing up. So, thank you!
[Report This]Date: 04/22/05 07:55 am Title: Safety First
it's okay. i love the challenge in this story. i definitely loved A/U :D :D that's why i was hooked on this, and i always anticipated the next chapters :D
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 04/22/05 03:06 am Title: Dating Dilemmas
awww...no Oriana!!! *sniffles* I can understand all the visions from her past coming back, but howie would never ever hurt her. And she possible just ruined everything with him! Nooooo! they are so cute together! Brian and Teags seem to be getting along nicely! Lets hope he doesnt screw her over though...stupid snake! lol. Loved it...thanks for updating! *GRINS* Do it again soon!
Author's Response: Visions finally make sense, how 'bout it? And, Brian's a stupid snake? *smirk* We might have to include that in detailing!
[Report This]Date: 04/11/05 11:33 pm Title: Safety First
HAHAHAHA. i was laughing out loud here about that last one. Mothers! And Cassie had to remind Oriana about brith control pills in front of Howie! whew!
good one. and i like the concern on Kevin's part, although I can't still imagine him as Brian and Alex's father. But that's okay. It never made me love this story any less... :D :D :D
Author's Response: Mothers are definitely a special breed! Though, we're sorry that you can't imagine Kevin as Alex and Brian's father. We wanted a very different combo from what you're used to seeing. And since Kevin was the oldest... We just liked the combination.
[Report This]Date: 04/11/05 11:24 pm Title: A Speeding Relationship
i'm truly enjoying this one. I hate Ace and his attitude.
At the end of the chapter, i was all-out smiling thinking about those shirts. LOL. even i wouldn't want my name on a pink shirt!
Author's Response: I don't think anyone wants a pink shirt with their name!
[Report This]Date: 04/11/05 11:12 pm Title: Swallowing a Bitter Pill
i always look forward to the updates on this story... :D
Author's Response: We're glad that you're enjoying the story. And, please, if you love this one, check out Starry Eyes' new story Whirlwind. It's a fantastic piece that we're positive you will enjoy!
[Report This]Date: 04/11/05 11:00 pm Title: Safety First
aww....what a place to leave off....but so fricken hilarioius! Wow...they are all something else. I hope that Kevy can win Oriana's trust....he sees something that nobody else does....that something is totally wrong. HOwie and Ori definitely both seemed humiliated beyond what is normal. Poor people! lol. Great job and please please update soon!
Author's Response: Glad you noted something was wrong. And, we think that we'd all be humiliated beyond what is normal if we were Oriana and Howie. Oh the cruel tortures of being able to craft a story with the trusty pen!
