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Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/05 05:09 am Title: Safety First

LMAO! LOVEDwhen Oriana bounced off the door! I've actually bounced off the corner of a wall before while walking in the dark, midst eating a Nutri-grain cereal bar thing-lol. And I LOVED the whole "Because I can see three of you..." SO Funny! LMAO!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!! ~Lenni~

Author's Response: We think your initial problem with bouncing off the corner of the wall was walking in the dark and eating at the same time. Quite the dangerous combo. But, we're glad you found it hilarious!

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/05 05:39 pm Title: A Speeding Relationship

such a cute chapter. Although the football jocks are cruel assholes. No wonder I never took the time to get to know any of them at my own high school. lol. Ace needs to lay off of Ori about dating Mac. He is no good!Anyways, I hope that Howie doesnt mess stuff up with Oriana, or her with him. They need to become an official couple!!! lol Dee and Elle seem like a riot too! great job! Please update soon!

Author's Response: We think the stereotype for football jocks are usually true... But, if one would like to counter our idea, please email biteme@hairmonkeyballs.com

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/05 01:58 pm Title: Swallowing a Bitter Pill

Lovely day...I just now woke up 10 minutes ago and have the day off work...so I call this catching up on reading day! lol. Anyways, it is good that Teags got Brian to agree to let Howie and Ori see eachother....but that is too good to be true really. I wonder what evil, twisted stuff he has planned out to do to the poor girl. Hopefully Howie will come to her rescue if it is anything and see his "best friend" for what he really is. Howie and Oriana do make quite a cute couple though. Ah, new love! lol. Loved the chapter. I am going to read the next one after I do my morning workout! I'm tellin ya, this story is amazingly awesome! Keep up the great work, girls!

Author's Response: Yes, new love is blooming within the knitted group of family and friends. And, of course evil, twisted stuff is bound to occur. Look who you're talking about. (It's mostly Starry Eyes, not me)

Reviewer: Maggie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/05 01:51 am Title: A Speeding Relationship

LOL! ARe they really going to give him that hideous neon PINK shirt? Howie's gonna ask for a purple one, too, isn't he? Favorite color after all. WHEN is Brian going to stop acting like a jerk? Will he ever stop hating Oriana? Oh, and does he go out for the Tartan football team? Heh, with Oriana, I kinda doubt it. We'll see, though, right?

Author's Response: Wow, many questions that will be answered in upcoming chapters. Doesn't take off the edge though, does it?

Reviewer: AngelgirlDorough Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/05 07:47 pm Title: A Speeding Relationship

Hey great job gurlas that is defenetly awsome I love it. But I belive that Ace can be a problem if he get to team up with Brian oh no hell will break loose. Can I have more?

Author's Response: Of course you can have more!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/05 06:12 am Title: A Speeding Relationship

LMAO! Well, I'm finally caught up-lol. SO good! I laughed throughout both chapters & Brian can be such an ass sometimes - a hot ass! Lol. GO HOWIE!!! UPDATE!!!! ~Lenni~

Author's Response: A hot ass? Does that mean he has fiery farts, too? Haha! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: AngelgirlDorough Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/05 06:20 pm Title: Swallowing a Bitter Pill

Whoa gurls you are great I can't believe what I just read. How Brian can be so vain and evil because of a stupid game. But I love the way you got me to imagen Howie in ties pants like ballet dancer. hooooo I love it. hehehe. Can I have more!

Author's Response: Thank you much for the compliments and the imagery!

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/05 05:55 pm Title: Interruptions

Brian sure is sweet to Teags, but a warlock to Oriana. I cant believe he didnt want Teagan to go to Ori when she was hurt...just cuz he hates her. ANd Teags ex is a psychotic nimrod. Hmm, sounds like Brian. Teagan needs to find a guy who is good all around! Oriana seems to be falling for Howie more than ever. Hopefully he wont disappoint her! Great job, UPDATE SOON!!!

Author's Response: UPDATE ALREADY HERE!

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/05 04:59 pm Title: Very Un-Brady

I understand why Oriana is so terrified of Kevin and dislikes him, bu he seems totally harmless. She should give him a chance! Brian is still being the ass of the century and Alex is just plain sweet. I wish I had a big brother like that! All I have is a little brother who doesnt care at all! lol. Ah well, anyways...another awesome chapter! ANd only one to read :o( NOOOOOO!!!!! Im telling you ahead of time, update soon!

Author's Response: My little brother doesn't care about me at all either, trust me! It's the genetic traits of little brothers!

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/05 04:29 pm Title: Sly Workings

Oriana and Howie seem to have their relationship progressing quite nicely!!! hehe. THey really are insanely crazy for each other! Teags seems to be rather pissed at Brian though...the plan is in action and working like a charm. Hopefully Brian will come to his senses and let Howie and Oriana be....but that would make things too easy. Life cant be made easy now, can it! and I've missed emailing with you too, Ana. I'll be writting in the next few days now that I know I wasnt a pain in the butt to ya! lol..okay, reading on because as always, you end it with a cliffhanger. Great job as always, girls!

Author's Response: Is insanely crazy for each other a good thing, Ashley? And you've never been a pain in the butt to me! You're my girl!

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/05 06:31 pm Title: Unyielding Love

Brian is a violent jack ass...my god, poor Howie. At least Oriana was there to help him feel better....after their argument and harsh words. Thankfully Alex and Nick were there to make things better quickly before they ruined any chance with each other. Awesome chapter, although the acting like they hate each other thing seems like it might end badly. I cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: Nick and Alex are something else, huh? Eavesdropping just to be supermen. Haha!

Reviewer: AngelgirlDorough Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/05 05:45 pm Title: Girls Do It Too

Hon I know she is the Co-writer in the story with you is just a typo I forgot the s. And I know she has great stories. I'm reading Every breath you take but I guess is on hold. But I'm famuiliar with her and I love it so don't worry the prps goes for both of ya hehehehe. :)

Author's Response: Ooooh! I was just covering my bases about Starry Eyes. I don't want her chewing my ass out or anything *shudders* And, I really don't know what's going on with Every Breath You Take. Knock her ass on that one!

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/05 06:56 pm Title: Superman

I hope that Teags sees Brian for the jerk-off he is. He has the wool pulled over her eyes. I hope Howie in his frantic state doesnt scare Oriana off. He really does care. It is so sweet! Another great chapter!!! I cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: Well, you've got some more chapters to go!

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/05 06:14 pm Title: Bitter Blackmail

awesome chapter. I have been away for far too long because I have a lot of catching up to do. I've always loved the story though. Anways, Brian is a stupid ass clown who needs to get counseling or better yet, locked up in the pshyc ward for testing on that sick brain of his. Howie's feelings for Ori are serious! And it sounds like she has a crush of her own on him! Alex is gonna make an awesome step-brother! Awesome job! I cant wait to read on!

Author's Response: Awe, you're back! I've missed you so much. Little late on the whole email thing, but I promise to get that back in gear! I've missed you! And, thanks for the prospective review of all the characters!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/05 05:46 am Title: Interruptions

Aww. Howie's SO sweet! Brian's still an asshole though - and Teagan's starting to piss me off now. Lol. UPDATE! ~Lenni~

Author's Response: Teagan's starting to piss you off? Wow, that's a change!