Date: 06/21/04 03:25 am Title: Ch 3
Awesome chapter, betrayal and twists acoming. I can't wait to see how everything turns out. Keep it coming.
Date: 06/21/04 03:19 am Title: Ch 2
My goodness, even more intriguing. I'm finding it a little difficult to decipher who is speaking when, but I re-read it and was able to, and so far the characters are very different from what I've seen before. Very nice job!
Date: 06/20/04 10:08 pm Title: Ch 1
Very interesting beginning.