Date: 10/04/06 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
Brian the leader oh my! I can't wait to read more.
Date: 10/04/06 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
God I love vampires stories especially if Howie is involved...
[Report This]Date: 10/04/06 05:54 am Title: Epilogue
that was good. I really liked it. Is there sequel in the works ?
Author's Response: Yes there is in fact a sequel in the works. Too many ideas popped in my head towards the end but I could only do them in a sequel so I planned the end for what I needed. :-D
[Report This]Date: 10/03/06 12:30 pm Title: Epilogue
awwwwwwwwwwww
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!
Is there gonna be a sequel to this story??--PLEASE SAY YES!!--PLEASE SAY YES!!!!--OMG---OMG!!!--What an awesome Epilogue!!--April had Kevins Baby??--awwww--soooo cute!!
hmmmmm...the Creator's still out there?--May---aw...that really makes me sad--I hope that Brian does know what she did for him-and maybe I will get some Bray scenes after all??--lol--Is that Brian or Kevin I wonder who was watching the twins??--hmmm...
I really do hope that you make a sequel to this story--you did such a good job to this one--I was on the edge of my seat-this story was soooo awesome!!
Good job hun!!--And I really am hoping that this becomes a sequel-your a really good writer :)
trina
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the story. And actually yes, I changed the orginal ending of this story because I had a bunch of ideas come to me that could only be done in a sequel so I geared the story towards a sequel.
[Report This]Date: 10/03/06 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 15
OMG.....OMG....
Wow...omg...I dunno what to say--I'm speechless....that ending was so incredible-I was expecting that at all...I'm so glad that Kevin really did help April out in the end-aw--he killed Howie?? :( And Brian...*tsk *tsk....I didn't get my Bray scenes--lol (Brian and May)--lol--But its all good--I really liked how you ended this story--you did such an awesome job hun!!!
trina
[Report This]Date: 10/02/06 02:11 am Title: Chapter 14
Can't wait for another chapter!!!
Did I ever tell you that I loveeeee this story???
trina
[Report This]Date: 10/02/06 01:49 am Title: Chapter 14
Can't wait for another chapter!!!
Did I ever tell you that I loveeeee this story???
trina
Author's Response: I hope you read this response. I have a bad habit of not writing when I'm at home on weekends, or I would have finished the next chapter. I'm also trying to decide on the exact way I want to end the story because this chapter will play a crucial part (if not the end). I hope that you enjoy what I will be writing and I hope to have it finished in the next couple of days. thank you for your reviews and patience. :-D
[Report This]Date: 10/01/06 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 14
wow i love Vampire stories and this a good one. Update soon.
[Report This]Date: 09/28/06 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 14
great job cant wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you like it. :-D
[Report This]Date: 09/28/06 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 14
HOLY %&^%&&*!!!!
OMG!!!!
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!
NOOOO!!--YOU CAN'T END THERE!!!
OMG....I LOVE LOVE LOVEEEEE This story!!!--This has got to be one of the BEST Vampire fics I have ever read in my ENTIRE life!!--I was soooo NOT expecting Kevin to do that!!--awe--poor April :(....but Maybe Kevin has another plan??--LIke maybe he's only acting as if he's on Brian's side??---hmmmm...
AWWW!!--NOO!!--Poor May :(--er--I wish Brian wasn't so evil!!--lol--aw--I can't help but feel bad for the girl even though Brian's evil-she still likes him :(....
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!! This story just keeps getting better and better--and I LOVE it!!
Good job hun!!!
trina
[Report This]Date: 09/28/06 05:11 am Title: Chapter 13
ok true story i wasn't going to read this story cuz i kinda judged a book by it's cover and i'm truly sorry it is an awesome/creative on the edge of your seat thriller! this story is awesome!!
i'm sorry for not reading it sooner....well keep updating i'm dying to know what happens...
Author's Response: I'm happy that you didn't judge it too long and were able to enjoy my story. Thanks for reading it and taking the time to review. :-D
[Report This]Date: 09/28/06 02:16 am Title: Chapter 13
Wow! Kevin is a bad guy...that i was not expecting. Good update by the way, so don't stop
[Report This]Date: 09/28/06 12:46 am Title: Chapter 13
Love it cant wait til the next chapter. the plot thickens lol
[Report This]Date: 09/27/06 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 13
oh wow!!!
ANOTHER AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!
That was a twist--"Kevin is on our side. He?s been infiltrating the rebels for the last hundred years to find out who is involved. To find out their plans. He will make sure April is here tonight I assure you of that.?
-OMG!!!!
I'm soooo excited to see how this is all gonna turn out!!--Aw...April and Kevin-thats sweet...hmmmm....I'm still trying to think where this is all leading!!--I LOVEEE IT!!
Thanks for the update hun!!--Each chappy just keeps getting better and better!!
UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!! :)
trina
[Report This]Date: 09/27/06 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 12
Hey I love the story, I can not wait for another update, I have not read a vampire fanfic this good in a long time.
