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Reviewer: xoxtrinaxox Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/06 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 12

aaawww--NO!!!!!--IT CAN"T END THERE!!

AAAHHH!!!--lol--C;iff hangers should be illegal!!--lol

OMG--Brian--don't kill May!!!--PLEASE...lol--I think I'm gettin a lil too involved with this story--but I can't help but really like it :)--The story line is awesome!!--And every chapter just keeps getting better and better...

aw--that must be soo hard for April to hear Kevin and A.J talk about her twin like that--especially since May is her twin--they have incredible bonds--but hopefully all will turn out well in the end and maybe Brian will turn good??--lol--I'm use use to Brian being the evil one--lol--its different--but a good different :)

CAN'T WAIT FOR ANOTHER UPDATE!!!

GOOD JOB HUN!!!!

trina

Reviewer: xoxtrinaxox Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/06 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 11

OMG!!!

AMAZING CHAPTER!!!

aw--Brian--what are you doing??--You aren't suppoes to do that to your cousin!!--oh boy--this is starting to remind me of a saying that skaspear once wrote in the play Macbeth "Oh what a tangled web we weave"--I feel so bad for the tiwns--they're stuck in the middel of all of this and they don't know what to believe...

awe--I feel bad for Kevin and A.J :(--Maybe April can find them and help them out??--Oh this story is sooo freakin awesome!!--I loveeee it!!

Each chappy gets better and better!!--GOOD JOB HUN!!!

yay!!--I got another chappy to read :)

trina

Reviewer: xoxtrinaxox Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/06 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 10

WHAT???? NOOOOOOOOOOO IT CAN'T END THERE!!

AHHHH!!!---LOL--oh now you have to update like ASAP!!

So I was wrong...it wasn't Howie or A.J that she was interested in--->It was Kevin!!--hmmm...she got good taste in men!!--lol-So A.J and Kevin are gonna try to help them out??--aw--I was hoping that Brian wouldn't be the evil one in all of this--I know I keep sayin this but I liked him with May...lol--Maybe there just might be this huge twist where he is the good guy *hint*hint...lol

UH-OH--I get the feeling that A.J and Kevin are in for it now--Brian caught them!!--I wonder whats gonna happen next--PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon :)--I really LOVEEEEE this story!!!


Thanks again for the updates!!--Each of the chapters were AMAZING!!

trina

Reviewer: xoxtrinaxox Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/06 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 9

WHAT??!!??

So Brian/Nick/Howie are all on the bad said and Kevin and A.J are the ones that are on the good side??--aw--I was hoping that they'd be all on the good side and that Brian really did like May-maybe in the end he does??-hhmmmm...I wonder who else April has her eyes on--I think she does like A.J!!--Or wait...maybe Howie???

Aw--I'm scared now--I don't want any of them to die--lol--I hope theres a happy ending??--

You are a very good writer by the way--I can really picture the characters-and I'm soooo curious as to whats going to happen--Good chapter hun!!

trina

Reviewer: xoxtrinaxox Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/06 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 8

Oh snap!!

ANOTHER AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!
OMG!!!!--Did I ever tell you that I loveeeee this story??--Cuz I really do--aw--they were couple tonight-almost like a fab 4 sort of thing-but I can't help but feel that danger's looming for the twins...hmmm...I'm still trying to figure out whats gonna happen..lol

Thank you soooooo much for updating!!!--and YAY!!--I got 2 more chappy's to read!!!

Reviewer: xoxtrinaxox Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/06 05:56 am Title: Chapter 7

aw--Brian!!!--what are you up to??

LOL--My fav line of this chappy "I?m sorry; I do have a tendency to startle women though I don?t understand why"--LOL--Brian=cocky..lol--I loveee it!!--Hmm...I wondering if in the end--would Brian actually fall in love with May??--Because that would be sooo WRONG if he was just usuing her--I hope that somehow he does end up liking her??--ahhh--Don't leave me hangin here!!--I need to read another chappy--and like ASAP--I'm on the edge of me seat!!

This story=FREAKIN AWESOMEE!!!

UPDATE SOON PLZ!!!

trina

Author's Response: Oh I had three more chapters that I hadn't put up here yet. I'm sorry. I haven't worked on this one in awhile but if you'd still like to read more I will re-read and continue the story. :-D

Reviewer: xoxtrinaxox Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/06 05:48 am Title: Chapter 6

Wha??

hhhmmmm...this story has got me all guessin!!--lol--Alex had to block their mind??--So I'm guessing that Brina/Nick/Howie are all the bad guys in this???--And Kevin and A.J are against them??--I really really really like this story!!--ah--crap--chappy 7 is next :(....I hope you updated frequently--cuz I don't know if I can wait long for another update--this story freakin rocks!!!

trina

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Date: 09/24/06 05:42 am Title: Chapter 5

I can't decided wither or not if Nick's the good guy in this story--or the bad guy??--aw--A.J'warning got me all curious...lol--another good chappy!!---aw--im almost at 7 :(....I don't want this story to end!!

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Date: 09/24/06 05:38 am Title: Chapter 4

Oh that was sooo foreshadowing!!--lol--The movie the twins were watching "Interview with a Vampire"--I'm actually in the process of getting that book--one of my friends told me about it and they got me curious...lol

Aw--Nick's fate had to be decided??--What did that little bugger do this time??--lol--YAY!!--He gets to live!!

hmmm...I wonder how this is all gonna go down...

Good chappy!!--Now moving along to chappy 5...

Reviewer: xoxtrinaxox Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/06 05:30 am Title: Chapter 3

UH-OH.....
Nick!!--What are you up to??--Aw--it doesn't look good for the twins...But hopefully the guys aren't good be mean/evil about anything??--I don't even think that made sense...lol

hmmm...I wonder what the meeeting is about??--and how come they're after the twins??--is it just because they like them??--I really am loving this story...

Now on to chappy 4...

Reviewer: xoxtrinaxox Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/06 05:20 am Title: Chapter 2

OMG!!!!
Its offical--I'm hooked!!

This is getting soooo good!!!--I'm like freaking out here--I was right!!--lol--I knew it was Brian!!--But--what--no--what are the boys up to??--I hope its nothing bad...aw--guys!!--be good!!

Now im unto chappy 3...I am loving this story!!

Reviewer: xoxtrinaxox Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/06 05:11 am Title: Chapter 1

ahhh--Good story so far!!!

hmmmm...I wonder which Backstreet boy May's dreamin about....Brian??--Thats my guess...lol

I heart Vampire fics!!--This one is awesome!!!--The way you write--its almost like I can picture the characters--its almost like im watching a movie--sounds werid I know..lol

Now I'm heading to read chappy 2

Reviewer: Jennifer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/04 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 6

When are you going to write more. It's interesting so far and you got me hooked.

Reviewer: A.W. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/04 03:43 am Title: Chapter 4

Love the story please update it!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, I will soon.

Reviewer: AJ'sSweety Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/04 01:53 am Title: Chapter 2

Gotta admit this is a great story. keep it coming. I would never have expected Brian as the leader. Great going.

Author's Response: Thanks, I thought it was about time Brian was a leader, an evil leader at that. HEH