[Report This]Date: 08/03/03 05:15 am Title: On The Verge
Dang... I thought Nemesis and Damaris were invincible? Dude, that'd seriously suck to have to play a strip club. This was a hilarious chapter. I love this story so much, but of course, Nemesis *the MOUTHY one* has to get caught. You know that's going to be freaking hilarious! But you know Damaris is gonna get her girl back. Can't wait to see what you come up with!
[Report This]Date: 07/27/03 04:29 am Title: Hunting Season
Dude! At least the homeless lady got a dollar! She was dead, but she got a dollar. So, Howie is a choosen one... Ain't that interesting. I would ahve seriously harmed that boy for directing all those zombies at my butt... But then again, I'd have just as much fun killing them. Go figure! Great chapter! You're almost at the end there chicky! I can't wait to find out what happens.
[Report This]Date: 07/27/03 04:28 am Title: Hunting Season
Dude! At least the homeless lady got a dollar! She was dead, but she got a dollar. So, Howie is a choosen one... Ain't that interesting. I would ahve seriously harmed that boy for directing all those zombies at my butt... But then again, I'd have just as much fun killing them. Go figure! Great chapter! You're almost at the end there chicky! I can't wait to find out what happens.
[Report This]Date: 07/25/03 12:34 am Title: Boys Club
Can we say psycho? The boys make such nice blood-suckers. I love this chapter. Sorry it took so long to review, I needed to get my computer fixed for college. But you've got a spark of talent. The boys are so going to eat Howie! Uh-oh!
[Report This]Date: 07/15/03 12:06 am Title: Alterations in the Heart
Uh-oh. That was a long and breath-taking chapter! Good job! The boys are definitely in a deadly situation. I can't wait to see what will happen in the mix of things. Hopefully Nemesis gets to take out some butt-munches. Heh. Good job, Jam!
[Report This]Date: 07/05/03 05:18 am Title: Bloody Deception
Hey! I knew I should be expecting a chapter on Friday, since you promised. Sweet chapter, too. Nemesis and her antics are the best part of the story - because I know that's how I would really act. Damarias and Nemesis are a freaking great team. They should both get to keep Howie for a toy *lol* Cabal and Demetrius parting was unexpected, but Demetrius is just a prick. Nariobi and AJ - what a surprise that he's falling for a beautiful vamp. Poor Brian. I'm curious to see what their lineage and whatnot has to do for them. Hurry with another chapter!
