Date: 04/13/05 08:15 pm Title: Chapter Seven
so awesome! update soon!!!!
Date: 04/11/05 11:09 pm Title: Chapter Six
The first part with Nick was freaking hilarious. Everyone can actually see the boy tying the bra to his head for a pair of earmuffs. That was absolutely beautiful. But, poor Kevin. And poor cutter...
Date: 04/11/05 11:09 pm Title: Chapter Six
awesome chapter once again! update soon!
Date: 04/11/05 11:06 pm Title: Chapter Five
Already knew it wasn't Nicky-Boy. The kid's too damn crazy for that stuff... Haha... But, the cutting's getting serious...
Date: 04/11/05 11:01 pm Title: Chapter Four
If Nick had been the cutter, you would have been able to see other scars along with the pit-bull attack. Of course, Nick could have been fronting, too. I just don't see how someone could keep that hidden if its on the arms. They do costume changings... But, if you wanted to do it, you could. All a matter of will. But, I'll stick to the assumption of Howie, AJ, or Brian.
Date: 04/11/05 10:58 pm Title: Chapter Three
Kevin's ruled out. But, holy moley, that gives you the creeps just reading the portion about the cutting. You've got a way with words, Ashley. You can actually feel like you're in the cutter's body, glancing down at your own marred body. A talent, Ashley. A rare and prized talent!
Date: 04/11/05 10:50 pm Title: Chapter Two
Nick is so cute. I think that's the one aspect that no one ever gets tired of. He can be such a moron, but so innocent at the same time. It's just cute. But, you've definitely got me thinking about who's hurting himself. I mean, AJ's killer at pool and it'd be too typical to let him be depressed. And, you're not typical. Howie's not one that you'd figure to be depressed... But, you're probably laughing because I'm analyzing. And, oh-so-freaking convienent that no one wanted to swim!
Date: 04/11/05 10:29 pm Title: Chapter One
Poor Nicky's tired. Could it be some source of cause? It's the only one you've really given detail about... Which, I know will get deeper. Did I mention you're fantastic?
Date: 04/11/05 10:24 pm Title: Prologue
So, I'm a complete and utter ass. I seem to be slacking when it comes to reviews and I actually forgot about this story. How could I possibly do that? Especially when your prologue is so catching. You've got so many details but still end up leaving such a mystery behind the key character. And, cutting is a seriously scary thing. I had one patient that was a cutter and actually cut herself so deep that she hit the bone and had to have major reconstructive surgery... But, that's another story for our emails! You're a great writer, Ashley!
Date: 04/10/05 04:23 pm Title: Chapter Five
I'm so loving this story. I can't believe it's not Nick. Well it has to be either Howie or Aj then cause you mentioned the cutter has no wife so that rules out kevin, and i'm not thinking it's brian. I'm probably wrong, but i'll go with Howie, lol. Keep up the good work, i can't wait to read more.
Date: 04/09/05 10:52 pm Title: Chapter Five
so good! update soon!
Date: 04/09/05 01:35 pm Title: Chapter Five
oh and btw, lol....GREAT chapter! update again soon pwease!
Date: 04/09/05 01:35 pm Title: Chapter Five
now this is interesting...and since you're really really smart at keeping who this cutter is, im not going to immediately cancel Nick out...who knows, maybe he had a split personality or whatever? LOL...if i guessed that wrong...im thinking it could be AJ...actually i dont know anymore, ugh.
Author's Response: Funny you should mention split personality...Just last night a friend ruled out Kevin from a previous chapter and I said "Or maybe he has split personality...never know with the way my twisted mind works" lol...Glad I am doing a good job at not giving it away..and remember...it could still be any one of the five! Thanks for reviewing and glad you like it. The next chapter is done, so be looking for it in the next few days!
Date: 04/09/05 03:30 am Title: Chapter Five
sorry the fixed one. ok its not Nick, i'm thinking AJ but i think i might be wrong, i have a feeling its Brian the person you wouldn't think it would be, but i could be wrong.
Date: 04/09/05 03:29 am Title: Chapter Five
ok its not Nick, i'm thinking AJ but i think i might be wrong, i have a feeling its Brian the person you would think it would be, but i could be wrong.