[Report This]Date: 08/19/04 03:54 am Title: Vindicated 3 (Part 2)
OHHH I can't follow i don't get the story too much and you be more explisit on the next chapter. Like how is really Howie thinking and if she is a good gurl a player and dumb. you know try to explain a bit more the origen of the whole ordeal.
Author's Response: I really aggree with you that this was a bad chapter.I know my excuse is horrible but I got tired and lazy and I only posted sections from my notebook.It was a really good chapter that should have been posted on one page (lol) and I may consider just flat out deleting the fourth section and posting it with chapter three because the chapter originally had alot more vital information than I realized.
[Report This]Date: 07/25/04 04:14 am Title: Vindicated 2
It was great! But why Howie can get another gurl sometimes when they see what they cannot have they want. Howie should try that lol!
Author's Response: I know lol.I'll tell him that eventhough I don't think he'll listen.He really wants Richy dead though.I think they need to sign a truce cause their both cute.I'll tell Cheri to get her priorities on men straight too lol eventhough we'll probably get into ANOTHER catfight hehe...
[Report This]Date: 07/23/04 09:39 pm Title: Vindicated 1
A great start but I have to admit at first when I read the little summary I thought it was another vampire story but this one it seems after i read it that its on our time and defenetly cut my eye I hope you have the next chapter soon! :)
Author's Response: LOL.No no.I don't fancy vampires at all though.Yeah but Vindicated does look kind of weird for a title.Glad you like it.=).No,I cant write vampire/fantasy stories.I really don't like reading them but some I can stand.Lord of the Rings. Um some really good BSB writer's stories.Other than that,I don'treally read them.
