[Report This]Date: 04/24/04 05:04 pm Title: Epilogue
I still can't believe you killed Yasmine. Pissed me off there Jammy-Jam! It was a great ending chapter though. Sorry I haven't gotten my chapters around for our junk. I hope to get them going, but I have finals coming soon. So maybe after those. I'm not sure. Take care, great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 04/23/04 11:40 am Title: Epilogue
OMG, I CAN'T BELIEVE I MISSED SO MANY CHAPTERS!!!!!!! THAT WAS SO SAD, I AM IN TEARS, I DIDN'T WANT IT TO END LIKE THAT, BUT THE WAY YOU ENDED IT WAS FANTASTIC. *EVEN THOUGH I WANTED A HAPPY ENDING*. i LOVED THIS STORY, AND I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE OF YOUR STUFF (PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!) BUT PLEASE I BEG YOU **MAKE THE NEXT STORY HAVE A HAPPY!!!!!! ENDING ** :o) Cheers ~Michelle~
Author's Response: lol, awww thanks for liking it girl! And I promise the next story which is up and posted "One Last Dance" will have a happy ending!
[Report This]Date: 04/23/04 03:00 am Title: Epilogue
Such a sweet yet sad ending all at the same time. I am crying even harder now. Seems time made things a little easier for everyone. I am so sad the story is over. I really enjoyed reading it! Your talent for writing is amazing!
Author's Response: Awwww, thanks so much for loving the story and sticksing through it till the end. lol, and don't worry I'm writing another story based on the movie "Dirty Dancing" called "One Last Dance" Check that out if you like, and thanks again! :)
[Report This]Date: 04/23/04 02:54 am Title: Final Farewells
Wow..I can't believe that such an exciting day getting engaged could end so tragically. Poor AJ and everyone else...I was in tears by the end of the chapter...great job. So much emotion put in to it..
[Report This]Date: 04/23/04 02:36 am Title: Lost Little Girl
Seems like Yasmines spirits were a little higher in this chapter. Them teasing Nick was priceless! So funny! i wonder what Kelvin has up his sleeve now though...he's one rotton man....
[Report This]Date: 04/23/04 02:22 am Title: WIthout Your Smile
Poor Yasmine...scared for her life. I am so glad that AJ went back to her, but dude...Kelvin needs to die!!! He is a sick piece of ****!!!!!!!!! Love the story...ya got me so hooked that it is not even funny
[Report This]Date: 04/23/04 02:04 am Title: Falling Further Away
Yasmine returned...thats a great thing...but what as with the guy calling claming to be her boyfriend? got me wondering...poor AJ though. He's so devistated....I could cry for the poor guy! I hope everything gets straightened out.
[Report This]Date: 04/23/04 01:49 am Title: Who Needs the World
I wonder where she disappeared to and what the message says. They must all be worried sick. Reading on...ya got me hooked!
[Report This]Date: 04/22/04 11:40 pm Title: A New Found Freedom
YAY!!! AJ and Yas are finally together. They make such a cute couple. Faith is adorable too. I hope everyone is okay though, with Kelvin lurking around. Wow....that's some scary issues there. Cant wait to read on!
[Report This]Date: 04/22/04 10:27 pm Title: No Conspiracy
aww...wow..so Yas knows that it was Kelvin? He told her? Wow...so was not expecting that! AJ is so sweet towards her though. They really need to be hooking up...although if I were her, I would not be ready to date either. Loving the story!
[Report This]Date: 04/22/04 10:08 pm Title: A Voice Within
the Boys doing a little detictive work to catch the guy...nice touch. I can't believe the sick bastard got her again though...I couldn't imagine....god. I wonder what will happen now. Sorry I havent read and reviewed lately...I am gonna try to catch up though tonight and tomorrow! Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 01/30/04 01:12 pm Title: A New Found Freedom
i loved that chapter!!!! i can't wait till the next one :) please update soon :)
[Report This]Date: 01/30/04 12:39 am Title: A Silent Content
Another great chapter. That letter was something else though. I wonder if in the back of her mind, something is clicking for Yasmine of who K.C. is and what he is getting at! Her and A.J, definitely have some unspoken feelings past friendship for one another! Loving the story! and I can't wait to read on!
[Report This]Date: 01/30/04 12:26 am Title: The Trouble With Love
Awww...Faith sounds so adorable! A.J. will be a good daddy! and Yasmine a great mother. I hope that her attitude isn't destroyed when the real father shows up and tells her (which is the impressin I got from the last few lines) wow...love the story!!!
[Report This]Date: 01/29/04 06:19 am Title: Have a Little Faith
Awww..how cool that she is having the baby. A.J's words were sweet too! Leave it to Nick to burst in in the middle of a lecture like that to get Anya!!! And they are closing Yasmines case? Woah! that sucks! I hope that something happens where they find the rapist when they don't expect it! Great chapter!!! Love your story so much!
