Date: 06/05/14 11:49 pm Title: 1
On this part....They stood in silence again staring at the water before Nick started humming I Got You which made Kevin smile.
And here....“It looks a little rough…” Kevin nodded as he was struggling to stay standing.
It looks like you got Kev and Nick mixed up in what they say or maybe I'm mixed up lol
Author's Response: I just went back and reread the chapter. It's not wrong. At one point they were both humming I Got You and then at the end it was just Nick humming it before he asks Kevin "So you really like that song huh?" Or something similar to that. It was Nick's way of seeking Kevin's approval and at the same time taking pride in the fact that Kevin really enjoyed something that was just Nick's. With regard to the second thing you pointed out. I can understand your confusion with that one. It's Nick who says it. I didn't bother saying that because the two of them were exchanging their dialogue. The confusing part was because I then put Kevin's reaction to it immediately afterwards which was his nodding. But no, neither were a mix up of people. lol no worries, but I'm glad you asked.
Date: 06/05/14 03:23 am Title: 5
emotional part I need a hankie lol
[at least some of it]
Author's Response: LOL yes, this sometimes does get a little sappy.
Date: 06/05/14 02:55 am Title: 4
Wow, almost a big fight and so soon
Author's Response: Yes, Kevin plus Nick equals lots of arguing lol
Date: 06/05/14 02:49 am Title: 3
great chapter
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 05/29/14 09:29 pm Title: 2
All I can say is toooo funny,You really know how to write how we fans 'see' the guys in our heads.
Author's Response: Thanks, I try!! :O)
Date: 05/29/14 09:15 pm Title: 1
ha ha, awesome start! God, Nick is going to get them lost. You did a great job no mistakes.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yup, I can picture Nick with no sense of directions at all! Enjoy your vacation!
Date: 04/08/14 01:17 pm Title: 21
Such a beautiful story! Loved the ending! I think somewhere you said that this was your first story with just two BSBs in it - you should do more! lol I thought it was an amazing thing to have Kevin bring Nick out fishing on his dad's birthday too.
Btw, I was going to read the Mel's Tree trilogy but I can't find the first one, so I figured I wouldn't read the sequels unless you think that the first is not really needed? And I missed a couple of stories when I was listing them down last time lol. I've started reading (two chapters) of the story where Kevin invites Nick, Brian and AJ out camping but it's just him and Nick for the first two days (I am so sorry, I am so bad with titles)
Author's Response: Hey Jess! Yup, this was the first time I ever wrote about just two of the guys. Since then I don't think I've ever really written a novel length story with only two or three besides the one I'm working on now. :O)
As far as Mel's Tree. When it was published as a real novel, I had to take it offline unfortunately. I do think you can read Season's of Change and not get too confused. I never did much with the third story though. Season's is probably my favorite thing I've ever really written but I don't talk about it much because it's the sequel to Mel's and since Mel's is offline, I don't bring up that particular trilogy. If you do read Season's let me know and I'll give you a cliff notes version of what happened in Mel's.
No worries about the names. I am terrible with that myself. LMAO
Date: 08/05/13 12:32 pm Title: 21
I forgot I had one chapter left of this story to read. Loved how it went when Nick finally spilled everything...I felt myself getting emotional just reading it. Amazing job Mare....I love your bromances very much!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot, Tracy! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :O)
Date: 08/03/13 01:50 pm Title: 20
That chapter made me tear up, Kevin wanting his father to forgive him and Nick just wishing he could be happy. Right in the heart. :(
Author's Response:
aww! :(
Date: 08/03/13 01:45 pm Title: 19
Lots of deep convos in this chapter, I got such warm fuzzies when Kevin was thinking about the time he visited Nick with Kristin at his solo show. That seems like a Kevin thing to do.
Author's Response:
I remember when he actually did that and how I felt knowing he took the time to go see it! I love Kevin!
Date: 08/03/13 01:39 pm Title: 18
Aw they found the fishing rod!!!
Author's Response:
YAY! lol
Date: 08/03/13 11:13 am Title: 17
i love these little flashbacks and stories from back then because they make so much sense. Its very realistic.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Tracy! I really try to make things as real as possible!
Date: 08/03/13 11:01 am Title: 16
I'll never forget that interview :( Nick crying gets me every time :(
Author's Response:
Is that AJ going to rehab? I wasn't a fan back then but I remember seeing that on TRL and saying that I wished one of those other guys would give that blonde one a hug!
Date: 08/03/13 10:53 am Title: 15
I bet Kevin tells great stories in real life too. I would be entertained for hours listening lol
Author's Response:
I know! And he's so honest and tells us the real thing without sugar coating. I would love to hear some of his stories!
Date: 08/03/13 10:45 am Title: 14
I love how you address Parisgate in this story!! I also love that at the end the waitress knows who Nick was and Kevin insisted on playing Help Me. aww. I loved that album.
Author's Response:
I loved writing the diner scene. I must have because I remember it very vivdly lol Thanks, Tracy!
