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Reviewer: BSBscottishfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/17 03:43 pm Title: real ending :O)

nooooooooooooooooooo why did you do that, poor Richardson Children just got their father back and their mother got killed this is so sad. I feel for Nick he was so close with their mom out all of them.

Nick just little cutie pie, got all the family and friend wrapped around his little finger even AJ. I think they owe him what about three or four toys lol. you killed of his mommy.

AJ - Acts hard but in the inside you just little softie. He loves to make fan of his brothers esp Nick

Brian - he typical self but would've love to see more of Nick and Brian.

Kevin - is typical big bro though, he big hard agent and little 8 boy can get allowed him.

Howie - adopted son/brother, and he just same as Howie.

Momma J - lovely and hard woman loves her boys. I do not think she shouts at Nick that much.

so Nick and Brian got their looks from their mother. AJ and Kevin their father right. I wonder if Nick got hard time in school bc his mom older then the others. FYI took me all day to read this and I am off to read the next part so mad about Jackie though

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I know it was mean of me to I'll off Jackie. I loved writing her, but for Nick to change into the character he does in the next story I had to do something traumatic and living without Jackie was the best way to affect the entire family.

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/13 10:33 am Title: real ending :O)

Hello, Mare! When I read your response yesterday in the forum about the inspiration in writing a story, I checked this story because Nick being a little boy and Kevin as a FBI agent is too tempting to miss. I finished this in 3 hours, and while I would have loved to leave a review every chapter, I just can't. First, I am in the office and should be working instead of reading your awesome story, and second, I just had to click that next chapter. As always, you did an excellent job. I enjoyed the 8 year old Nick, angel Brian, Rebel AJ and the good detectives Howie and Kevin. Thank you for not making Howie part of that baby killers' group, it would really break my heart.

you are really good with suspense kind of story. Well, you already know that by now and I will keep on reminding you. lol

did you really write a sequel to this? I can't find it. I'm dying to know if Ariana was talking to Rob. lol

Author's Response: Aww, what a nice surprise! I'm glad you enjoyed this one. It's probably my favorite thing I've written. Also glad to know you've found the sequel. :O) Thanss, Ritz!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/13 10:17 am Title: real ending :O)

:O omg Jackie.....nooooooo :( Ariana....I don't like the looks of this one bit. Anazing story as always Mare!!! Now onto the sequel!!!

Author's Response:

I know! I had to though! lol Thanks for reading this, Tracy! Hope you enjoy the sequel as much as you did this one!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/13 10:01 am Title: 39

Awwwww. I love how they always pick on AJ lmao!!! This chapter definitely reminded me og blue bloods with tbe family dinner :)

Author's Response:

Yes Blue Bloods is very Protect and Serve ish! I refuse to say it the other way around! LOL

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/13 09:35 am Title: 38

This chapter started all sweet and wow twisted John!!!! That scene was one of my favorites, loved that interrogation of John and Kevin freaking out!

Author's Response:

Aww thanks, Tracy!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/13 06:53 am Title: 37

I was on the edge of my seat with this chapter. Poor....well poor everyone!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/13 06:53 am Title: 37

I was on the edge of my seat with this chapter. Poor....well poor everyone!

Author's Response:

Yeah, this is not a happy, fuzzy chapter! :O(

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/13 09:45 am Title: 35

I KNEW IT WAS TYLER.....oh shit. I love being right, bet he ends up dead too.....love the lie he told Nick and Patty, I knew he got Nick willingly.

Author's Response:

LMAO see, there ya go! Good instincts!!! i love waking up to a ton of reviews from you! Thanks, Tracy! You are almost finished! Wow!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/13 09:03 am Title: 34

Oh that Tyler LOL geez hes asking for trouble questioning AJ like that. I really loved this chapter, it was very dark and suspenseful like your writing is now....it is so awesome to see you haven't changed at all ;)

Author's Response:

Only have gotten darker and crazier! Thanks, Tracy! LOL at all the Tyler mentions.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/13 08:47 am Title: 33

Whaaaaaa??? See I knew Patty had a link in this whole thing and it's her damn dad. wow. I am literally speechless!!

Author's Response:

YAY!! Glad I caught you unawares!!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/13 06:59 am Title: 1

Omg i wanted to slap Brian so much. Hasn't he heard the song "Billy Don't Be A Hero" LOL. Kids, I swear. While he had good intentions, not so smart to go chasing a serial killer.

But now the ending of the chapter bothers me. Where the hell is Nick????

Author's Response:

LOL I know! Duh, Brian!!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/13 06:47 am Title: 1

Eep. I might finish this tonight, but wow. Loving all the action in the last couple chapters and the details you put in are great. I think this guy is going to the hospital to.finish off AJ maybe? Yikes!!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/13 06:47 am Title: 1

Eep. I might finish this tonight, but wow. Loving all the action in the last couple chapters and the details you put in are great. I think this guy is going to the hospital to.finish off AJ maybe? Yikes!!

Author's Response:

Thanks, Tracy! :O) I tried to out a lot of action sequences in. Sometimes they look better in my head though but occasionally they come out the way I want them. The ones in this one did!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/13 06:35 am Title: 30

Wow, this just gets crazier....I don't blame Kevin at all for being angry with his dad. Matt was a surprise....wonder what is up with Tyler then???

Author's Response:

I would be pretty angry too!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/13 06:27 am Title: 29

Ohhhh so Kevin senior was in witness protection.....that explains so much, especially about Maria, but I still feel maybe Tyler is working with the killer/kidnappers and it's someone in the department helping.

Author's Response:

Boy you really don't like this Tyler fellow, do you? LOL