Date: 07/17/13 09:24 am Title: 28
Oh geez..... I.... Wow, this is so good I almost want to bite my nails, I am in total shock about the "dad" stuff already and now Kevin Senior might still be alive? Maybe ge didn't really die and it was all a cover up. Can't wait to see...
Author's Response:
LOL And the cliffies keep coming! Thanks, Tracy! I am loving your reactions to this!
Date: 07/17/13 07:23 am Title: 27
Omg the memories flashing in his mind almost made me cry, especially the one of him falling asleep in Kevin's lap watching Blue's Clues and him taking his first steps :( i knew Nick wasn't dead, I think the guy who took Nick is someone who Kevin isn't thinking about. i can't click Next fast enough LOL
Author's Response:
That chapter was so hard to write :O(
Date: 07/17/13 07:15 am Title: 26
Its now 2am and my night off, I'm still reading LOL goddamn it!!! I still think I'm right that Nick went willingly with the asshole and whoever he is it's right under Kevin's nose. Thia Maria chick is awfully suspicious too....hmmm
Author's Response:
LMAO aww go to bed! That's Maria for you! If you notice Maria and Ariana are in this one as well as Separate Ways too! I didn't realize that until I started reading it the other day.
Date: 07/17/13 04:37 am Title: 25
I seriously want to punch the asshole in the throat for doing this to them. UGH!!! I really do think Nick went with the guy thinking he is his dad or something, and the.guy tricked him into thinking nobody wants him :( asshole. I couldn't wait to get home from work to read lol
Author's Response:
aww lol glad you're finding it so addictive!
Date: 07/16/13 09:42 pm Title: 23
I think Kevin is right about Patty and talking to her will reveal a lot that possibly was overlooked before. Side note just wanted to let you know that my friend Ali has been reading this too, she told me she's on the sequel and said you were a "sick puppy," for all the mean cliffies LOL i told her to read It Stays as well ;)
Author's Response:
Glad to now she's reading. Tell her to leave a review one day! And yes, my cliffies in the sequel are pretty mean! LOL Hopefully she'll like It Stays! Thanks, Tracy!
Date: 07/16/13 08:30 pm Title: 22
Ugh I feel so bad for their family :( Poor boys and Jackie....
I somehow really believe Nick went willingly with the guy and he is fine, probably thinking nobody wants him :(
Author's Response:
That just breaks my heart to think he might be thinking that! :O(
Date: 07/16/13 07:37 pm Title: 21
Poor Nicky :( I bet that is the worst for a family of a missing person, not knowing if they are afraid or hurt. Kevin doesn't need this right now and I'm glad AJ is all right *whew* this is intense! I hope more clues come to light soon.
Author's Response:
Aww, yes! I can't even imagine what that would feel like. Poor AJ, I had to shoot him lol but I didn't kill him! :O)
Date: 07/16/13 06:52 pm Title: 20
I really love the buildup again in this chapter, but now I think the killer has confirmed Kevin's suspicions about Nick being taken. Like I said he had a right to be paranoid and the killer is playing a game. Ugh!!!!
Author's Response:
Ugh indeed! LOL
Date: 07/16/13 06:46 pm Title: 19
boy like I said, Kevin can't catch a break.and now Nick is upset at him again :(
This is frustrating me so bad. You really meant it about the mean cliffies and I should have expected this from you LOL can't wait to read and find out what happens to make him miss Nick again...
Author's Response:
Aww Nick is often annoyed with Kevin! And starting next chapter when the action really picks up, mean cliffys will abound!
Date: 07/16/13 06:39 pm Title: 18
I kind of expected Lisa to turn up again just not dead lmao. I know I have to be right about Tyler. I also think Howie has a good point about Kevin getting too into the case and getting attached....hopefully he doesn't regret that later. Really loving the storyline Mare. It really is like watching a TV show.
Author's Response:
Yes, Lisa was a very short lived idea lol I am happy to hear it is playng out like a TV show! That was my intent! Thanks, Tracy! :O)
Date: 07/15/13 11:55 am Title: 17
This is driving me just as crazy as it is for Kevin!!! Holy crap lol this guy is frustrating. I got a feeling he'll make another appearance soon. Tyler is on my shit list now....he's up to no good.
Author's Response:
LOL I named Tyler after a kid I did NOT like at all in high school! Random tidbit for you! Thanks for reading this, Tracy! I can't believe you're already this far along! :O)
Date: 07/15/13 11:00 am Title: 16
This only makes me question Tyler more, it seems very fishy he isn't following up on anything. I think maybe he is hiding something, maybe has something to do with it. curiouser and curiouser....
Author's Response:
Hrmm.... could be! Thanks for all these review, Tracy! I'm so glad you're enjoying this one! I consider this one and its sequel my babies and have been working on rewriting them for OF purposes.
Date: 07/15/13 10:42 am Title: 15
"why does everyone give this child candy?"
"because I'm cute" - LMAO.
I knew it! I knew Kevin being taken off the case would have repercussions, and that line at the end of the chapter made me VERY nervous. Nice build up to the drama that I am gathering is about to happen. Loving this story.
Author's Response:
At least he knows he's cute, right? Warning this story is LOADED with mean cliffies that haven't started yet but will relatively soon. The sequel is even worse but the good thing is it's all done? LOL
Date: 07/15/13 10:02 am Title: 14
Yikes, that was worse than the terrible date Nick had in Finding.Carter at the Ihop lol. Nick keeps upping the cuteness in each chapter it seems. ;)
I knew Lisa wasn't gonna be around long but I think she overreacted to be honest, and Kevin was trying to tell the truth. Seems he cant catch a break, can he?
Author's Response:
I know, I'm not very nice to Kevin in this one! Consider it payback for how he acted through a lot of Separate Ways! LOL and sometimes I went a little over the top with the cuteness level for Nick but seriously when writing him this young, I had to because when else would I get the chance? Thanks, Tracy!
Date: 07/15/13 09:35 am Title: 12
I think that Kevin not being on the case is gonna blow.up.in their faces....i also feel that Kevin is right to worry about his brother. Not sure how I feel about Lisa....I have a weird feeling she won't be around long knowing your track record lmao.
Author's Response:
What, ME? lmao ;)
