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Reviewer: scarlett Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/05 03:23 am Title: 17

please, Mare. Once i began reading this and got hooked up with the story, I'm beginning to get scared. and very much worried that the killer will harm Kevin's family. Please, don't let that happen. If that may happen, please don't let anyone die. please. i'm looking forward to reading the next chapters..this is like reading another paperback mystery novel. good work. :D

Author's Response: Thanks Scarlett, ahh the pressure lol i'll talk to my characters and see what they have to say lol

Reviewer: Anita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/05 03:38 am Title: 17

oh my gosh so much drama! this chapter was exciting and great. though i am supposed to be on yuour new update list i never got this update:( well keep up the great work

Author's Response: Aww *kicks my update list*

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/05 02:12 am Title: 17

Wow. Nothing too, too bad happened here - least they now know where the Bastard was/is calling from. I still say it's the cop who took over the case though, 'cause he's such an asshole. An' I'm missin' Nicky & the other Boys. UPDATE!!!!!!! ~Lenni~

Author's Response: Aww NIcky and the boys will show up again shortly I promise lol

Reviewer: Roxy! Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/05 10:14 pm Title: 17

Oh MY GOODNESS you are taking way too long with this day! I'm soooo anxious to find out why this one changes his life completely and why Tyler is so passive about hard evidence! I think Tyler knows who's behind it and is there to throw the FBI off the track. He's going in the opposite direction of the evidence, while Kev's still on the case when he's not supposed to be. Please let me arrest him! He's a bad, bad man and he needs to pay for what he's doing. Please keep Nicky safe! Hope for an update soon!

Author's Response: LOL sorry I know it seems like this day is lasting forever but a whole lot of stuff needs to happen on one day so i'm doing the best I can.,.The sequel Roxy becomes an agent, lol What did oyu think of the Numb3rs finale?

Reviewer: Roxy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/05 11:12 am Title: 16

Dude, just report the jerk. You can't leave any lead untouched it has to be seriously investigated by at least a paper-pusher before it can be dismissed so easily. I must admit, I'm a little scared for Kevin. I don't want anything bad to happen to his perfect little family or himself, but I have faith in you, Mare! I know in the end Kev & Nicky will be healthy and happy. You can't let anything happen to that cute little boy and his hero! Can't wait for tomorrow's update!

Author's Response: They are a perfect little family aren't they? lol Guess we'll have to wait and see what happens.

Reviewer: Anita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/05 02:33 pm Title: 16

omg how could you just leave me like that? you need up update and update soon my hubby is so brave!

Author's Response: Aww lol he's not your hubby! ;)

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/05 03:44 am Title: 16

WTF!?!?! *WHY* is *THIS* the *LAST* day of normalct 4 Kev?!?!?! HUh?!?!?! Huh?!?!?! Does sumthin' happen 2 Nicky 'cause he goes investigating?!?! And I sitll say it's that dude who took over the case! ISWEAR IT'S *HIM*!!!!!!! The frigin' dumbass! You check out EVERY lead, NO matter HOW insignificant it may seem! Stupid mother......*cusses ass hole out* UPDATE!!!!!!!!! ~Lenni~

Author's Response: LOL I love reading your comments Lenni!

Reviewer: Roxy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/05 02:24 am Title: 15

*sniff, sniff* I think I got whatever bug Nicky and Kev got. Can I take a day off of work, too? I don't like your cliffhangers and the little thing at the end saying you'll update again in maybe a week. I wanna know now! Obviously can't wait for the next one, you're an amazing writer. Have a good one!

Author's Response: THanks so much Roxy! Sorry to hear your sick! Nothing sucks more than a stomach virus lol se ya in about a week...maybe hehehe ;)

Reviewer: Anita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/05 04:34 pm Title: 15

omg wow excellent chapter i didnt even know you had updated. you rock mare and kevin scratching his butt? can you please have my husband control this gross male urges? lol

Author's Response: Thanks Anita! you know AOL won't let me send you guys email anymore if you are on AOL and on my mailing list. I have no clue why but it's annoying. :( Anyway if you check this I have a new Apartment chapter up now lol

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/05 02:33 am Title: 1

Btw, I did have a very good birthday - thank-you. Also, UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! Have I made my point clear? Lol. UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! ~Lenni~ Hehe.

Author's Response: hrmmm...me thinks you want me to update I wonder why I am getting that vibe? lol

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/05 02:20 am Title: 15

*feels sick to stomach* How the Hell did the Bastard get into Kev's Mom's house & steal a Precious Moment's figurine? Huh? Nicky's next, ain't he? The bastard's gonna take poor lil' Nicky, an' make Kev get him back 'fore it's too late an' he's gonna kill Nicky 'fore Kev can find him - or seriously hurt poor lil' Nicky. Ack! SAVE LIL' NICKY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Also, I LOVED the bit about Kev scratching his ass right after he got up. LMAO! UPDATE!!!!!!!! ~Lenni~

Author's Response: LOL hey when you gotta scratch you gotta scratch lol

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/05 04:52 am Title: 14

Aww. Poor Nicky! *hugs him* I cry too when I'm sick & I just turned 21 last Sunday. And I'm with Brian on the weak stomach thing-lol. And poor KEv - he's gotta work, but is now sick too. I really thoguht Nick had gotten nabbed while at Friendly's - was SO releived to find out he was only barfing-lol. UPDATE!!!!!!!! ~Lenni~

Author's Response: Aww it sucks being sick doesn't it? I wanted you all to thikn he got was going to get nabbed at Friendly's but why would I make it that easy on myself? If he is even going to get nabbed in the first place lol ;)

Reviewer: Anita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/05 01:39 am Title: 14

great chapter totally loved it you rock and YAY KEVIN AND HIS GF BROKE UP YAY CAN I HAVE KEVIN NOW?

Author's Response: nope sorry you may not have Kevin lol

Reviewer: Anastacia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/05 07:34 pm Title: 14

Awe, now Howie won't be afraid of all those 'partner' cracks with Kevin! And, I so thought that Nicky was getting snatched at the Friendly's. It would have been the perfect opportunity! But, hey, we all knew the Lisa thing wasn't going to be working out. And he didn't even get any break-up sex. Instead he got the flu... Damn...

Author's Response: LOL The way Howie always responds to certian questions made me write that in there. Sometimes I swear he's terrified everyoen thinks he's gay. It's kind of an ongoing joke I have with friends so I put that in for their benefit. Gotta love the flu, those and ear aches are the worst!

Reviewer: Roxy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/05 04:08 pm Title: 14

Ah, the wonderful season of finals! Great chapter! I was scared like Kev there for a minute. It's sad they're both sick! :( Anyways! Have a great week, can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks Roxy! Hope you had a great week too and not finals for me more like concert season lol