Date: 07/03/13 06:44 pm Title: 35
Really, Mare? REALLY???
Author's Response:
*nods and shrugs* lol
Date: 07/03/13 06:33 pm Title: 34
Well, again.... I'm right, but I'm wrong. but I'm right. haha.
Author's Response:
Is every review like tihs? lmao
Date: 07/03/13 06:23 pm Title: 33
AAAAHHHHH! This is me screaming because I'm wrong, but I'm right. Right? Right?!
Author's Response:
right? lol
Date: 07/03/13 06:10 pm Title: 1
Gasp! This means it's not Scott Wilson???
Author's Response:
lol
Date: 07/03/13 05:47 pm Title: 1
Well, since you're asking, I'll stop reading for now and tell you what I'm thinking :) I figured out that Kevin Sr. wasn't dead when Kevin found the card. I suspected Witness Protection Program, of course. Then, I figured that he was back in town to try and protect Nick, which I was right about, but I honestly kind of hoped that he would have Nick with him, though I'm not surprised that he doesn't. Now, I suspected Matt's involvement very early on, though I didn't expect him to turn up dead. So, here's the current theory: I'm thinking Patty's dad is Scott Wilson and that maybe he is somehow tied to Kevin Sr.'s Witness Protection thing, just to bring things full-circle. Maybe he moved down the street from Kevin's family on puropse to get some kind of revenge? Then, knowing what Kevin Jr. does for a living, since he's a lunatic anyway, the baby killer case is his having his demented "fun" in getting Kevin in on the case. So, now Jackie is in some grave danger since she's going to Patty's house. and of course, she's been lured out of the hospital where the other boys are. Eek!
Author's Response:
Holy crap, Emily! I can't believe you actually finished this today! lol Well by now you know you were close but a bit off in parts. But close, I'm impressed. Seems like your head can go to the same places as mine! Maybe a nice suspense story should be in your future? Anyway, I'm going t go red the rest of what you have to say and respond. :O)
Date: 07/03/13 05:36 pm Title: 1
Oh, Jesus. Wow. Great storytelling here! Again, I'm a little afraid of what was in your head here...lol
Author's Response:
Aww! I wish I knew wat you were talking about here because the chapter you write this for is missing. It just says 1. LOL
Date: 07/03/13 05:09 pm Title: 29
Well, I'm right so far! I have a feeling you've thown something in there that I'm not going to see coming, though.
Author's Response:
Aww now I really want to know what you think is going to happen! LOL
Date: 07/03/13 03:28 pm Title: 27
Wow, what a relief to see that it wasn't Nick! I really didn't think it was, but I was so sucked in by Kevin's memories of Nick as he was walking into the morgue. I could really feel what he was feeling there, maybe because I have a little guy of my own. Ugh...maybe I shouldnt be reading this. Lol
Author's Response:
Aww, yes this was a really disturbing chapter, I mean the whole idea of killing kids is disturbing in general but to think it's a tiny Nick was not fun to write. Sorry!
Date: 07/03/13 02:57 pm Title: 25
Well, now I have a real theory. Off work today, so I may very well get sucked up into reading this and end up seeing if I'm right! To comment on the actual writing just a bit, the grammar police are noticing a few sentence fragments. The content is so good, though, that I don't care!
Author's Response:
Ooh, I love when people have theories! please share what you think it is! lol I love seeing if I am predicatble or if people are completely being misled! enjoy your day off! I plan on staying in my pajamas all day if possible!
Date: 07/03/13 02:47 pm Title: 24
Well I was starting to think it might be the dad, but I think it's too early in the story for that. hmmm
Author's Response:
The dad kidnapped Nick you mean?
Date: 07/03/13 02:48 am Title: 23
I like how you did this chapter going between Kevin at the hospital and the speech of the kidnapped boy's dad. It gave it another layer that made it feel so much more emotional. Well done!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I think this was one of my favorite chapters to write as well! Glad you liked it! :O)
Date: 07/02/13 12:05 pm Title: 21
Oh, this chapter gave me chills. I anticipated this would happen, but I figured the guy would go after him while Kevin was around. Now to go look at the phone number to see how it spells string bean.
Author's Response:
You should have seen me sitting and staring at my phone trying to pick out a word based on a phone number lol I finally landed on string bean after about ten thousand tries.
Date: 07/02/13 02:23 am Title: 18
I wondered whether that might have been Lisa, but figured Kevin would have recognized her on the surveillance video? Also, I really like the idea of Kevin and Howie being childhood best friends. I don't their friendship has been highlighted much in the media, but I bet they're pretty close,, or at least were at some time, considering the proximity of their ages.
Author's Response:
I have a very hard time keeping any kind of female character alive for a long period of time! LOL It's something I have been working on but yeah, they just don't seem to survive very long. I think Howie and Kevin have a very special bond since they are so close in age. It seems like they always are the ones who went out clubbing together and hanging out on vacations etc... I remember Howie tweeting that he and Leigh were on a ski vacation with the Richardsons a few years back and I thought that was all kinds of adorable!
Date: 07/01/13 12:22 pm Title: 17
And the plot thickens. Love it! Darn you, Mare. I stayed up until 1 AM reading this. I guess that's the mark of a good story.
Author's Response:
Wow! Yeah when I saw this review said chapter 17 I was like "Damn!" Glad it kept your attention and once again, thanks for reading! I hope it continues to keep you up late at night reading! LOL
Date: 07/01/13 05:32 am Title: 8
I'm a little worried for Patty, but isn't this the character you said was your self-insert into the story?
Author's Response:
Yes she is! LOL Just because she's me doesn't me she's safe you know! Although I'm not saying she isn't... :OP
