Date: 06/04/07 03:42 pm Title: American Baby 5
I like the AMERICAN BABY STORY but what is up with California and In The Rough?? They have nothing to do with AMERICAN BABY!
Date: 06/02/06 05:06 am Title: American Baby 5
Ok, great ending, but confused about the other chapter,lol.
Author's Response: Um yeah lol. I wrote the other stories elsewhere from home and I needed someplace I could put them so they would be safe and I could access them from home to update. Thanks for reviewing. It's greatly appreciated.
Date: 06/02/06 04:58 am Title: American Baby 4
Such a shame that something like this had to happen for them to be close again. Great chapter once again.
Date: 06/02/06 04:54 am Title: American Baby 3
Poor little guy, no kid should see those things. Let's see what happens to thoman, kevin will kill him for sure.
Date: 06/02/06 04:49 am Title: American Baby 2
Father instinct.. Great chapter.
Date: 06/02/06 04:45 am Title: American Baby 1
Great start. NEXT
Date: 12/20/05 08:34 pm Title: American Baby 5
aww cute ending.
Date: 12/20/05 08:32 pm Title: American Baby 4
im glad that asshole will be sent to jail..its what he deserves.
Date: 12/20/05 08:29 pm Title: American Baby 3
aww.. that sad..
Date: 12/20/05 08:26 pm Title: American Baby 2
great chapter, a bit confusing in the beginning though.
Date: 12/20/05 08:22 pm Title: American Baby 1
wonderful start, i loved it.
Date: 04/11/05 03:36 am Title: American Baby 4
If Kev kills Thomas, he'll go to jail n he'll NEVER get to hug his baby n grandbaby again - he's GOT 2 remember that! UPDATE! ~Lenni~
Date: 04/08/05 02:19 am Title: American Baby 3
i'm hooked on this. you're showing a scenario of a situation that usually happens in someone's life and it's affecting the readers. please update. i want to know what happens next. Thoman should go to jail, or be burned alive.
Date: 04/05/05 10:52 pm Title: American Baby 3
I'll never understand why women stay with their abusers and try to protect them. They say that they love these men, but it's not love. It's some...twisted fantasy... Which makes it perfect to write about. You've got a winner on your hands. (Though, from your last reply to my reply, I'm hoping that you didn't stop reading my fictions. And, I'm honored that you said all those nice things. Thank you).
Date: 04/05/05 02:35 am Title: American Baby 3
Thoman is such a bastard! How DARE he beat n rape Anna! And how DARE he hurt lil' Brian!!!! GRR!!!!!! UPDATE! ~Lenni~