[Report This]Date: 03/30/05 07:15 pm Title: American Baby 2
Kevin better hurry up & find proof, since he's so sure of it. UPDATE! ~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 03/29/05 10:45 pm Title: American Baby 1
I read this earlier, but really didn't have a chance to comment. And, now I can. I think this is really original. Just the thought of Kevin getting cosmetic surgery sent me into a giggle. Seems like a really strained relationship. My only suggestion is maybe italisize the thoughts so they're separated from the spoken conversation. That can tend to get confusing.
Author's Response: HTML kills me. If i sent it over the internet, youd see I have it italisized. So I'll just try and put he though, kevin thought, ya know or most likely ill try and put in ' ' those. thanks for reading though!
Author's Response: I meant email lol
Author's Response: Ah...and do you know you're such a great writer. I was honored to have you actually glance at my story lol cause I used to read yours and jaime's stories all the time ;)
[Report This]Date: 03/29/05 03:42 pm Title: American Baby 2
Anna is definitely lying through her ass. I just hope, since Kevin does sense it, that he can do something about it before she's really in trouble. But I have a feeling things are about to get much worse! Great chapter! Update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, I know, bad Anna. But to not have a male figure to look up to, you sometimes turn to guidance of males and-well ya get the point,Have you heard american baby yet on the radio?
[Report This]Date: 03/29/05 03:38 pm Title: American Baby 1
really good start! Hopefully Kevin wont screw up again since Anna has warmed up a little towards him!
[Report This]Date: 03/29/05 03:31 pm Title: American Baby 2
hmm this seems interesting....i like it update soon...
Author's Response: Thankyou. I hope I please your expectations.
[Report This]Date: 03/29/05 02:16 am Title: American Baby 1
Kinda cute. Not totally sure of what's going on - mainly 'cause I'm half asleep - lol. It's not you - it's me - haha.
But, yeah, UPDATE!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: well hopefully youll awake and review my story again lol
