Date: 08/29/05 05:19 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
that brought tears to my eyes! Gosh--I can't believe what Kev was saying....he CANT die! I mean-he's like--a hero for the other guys.....it can't just end! Amazing chapter--i luved it!
Date: 08/29/05 07:21 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
I thought they were *plastics*???? Strange...lol.
And *WHERE* IS KEVIN!?!?!?!?!?!?!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewig! And they are plastics...since Anita is better now, they are all willing to be her friend again and are making up excuses...and since Anita doesnt really have anyone at the moment, she is accepting. You'll see where Kevin is in 20! I may update today...or maybe tomorrow...I dunno yet! Thanks again
Date: 08/29/05 04:10 am Title: Chapter Ten
First of all, i CANNOT BELIEVE HOW FUCKING MEAN HER FRIENDS ARE!!! well, her former friends. gosh, you'd think they'd be a little bit sorry that Kevin's condition is worse, and that hers isn't getting much better. But nooo they're too snobby and stuck up. this story teaches you valuable lessons--like its what on the inside that matter.-- im completely loving this story!!
Second of all, I feel sooo bad that Kevin's getting worse again! I can't believe this is waht so many people have to deal with, and yet almost nobody knows how much they suffer..
Author's Response: Thanks for your reviews...just wait...things get pretty intense in the next couple chapters. Her friends are based on what the popular crowd were like at my old HS...dunno if thats what it is like everywhere, but I assume so to a certain extent. Thanks again:)
Date: 08/29/05 03:15 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
aawww that was excellent great job my life is getting back to normal!
Date: 08/29/05 03:09 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
excellent, emotional and real. you are so talented this chapter was the bomb
Date: 08/29/05 03:07 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
YAY IM GOING HOME IM SO HAPPY AWESOME
Date: 08/29/05 01:03 am Title: Chapter Eight
oh, no...i almost started crying!! that's so sad! I mean--Nick crying is so incredibly cute(i can imagine)...but..not over the fact that Kevin might die! thats just horrible. this was a very well written chapter--good job! i luved it(despite the sadness)
Date: 08/29/05 12:51 am Title: Chapter Seven
aww poor nick! He's always making stupid mistakes that cause people to be mad at him! or so i've heard...lol i liked the chapter tho, like i've said before, you REALLY get the emotions right!
Date: 08/28/05 11:46 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
awesome chapter! update soon!
Date: 08/28/05 11:04 pm Title: Chapter Six
aww it was so sweet when Kevin kissed her!! Why did it have to be ruined by her friends plans and jealousy that she has someone to love when they dont? gosh--like it was said one time in a movie(here on earth) "some people live their whole lives without falling in love. but i lived, and i fell in love." thats what the girl said when she was dying of cancer, and i think it's true of Anita too. i luv this story! lol you should sooo get it published!
Date: 08/28/05 10:50 pm Title: Chapter Five
well, at least she's deciding to befriend him, which is good. I'm glad they're trusting each other.
Date: 08/28/05 10:36 pm Title: Chapter Four
ouch, I hope i NEVER get cancer of any kind!!! its got to majorly suck, and hurt, and just..OW. I love you're writing. You get the emotions right on target and the words just flow together so naturally! I wish mine were that way, but it's not. btw, thanx for reviewing on my stories. i appreciate it.
Date: 08/28/05 10:10 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
Owh, I'm so curious. What will happen next?
Author's Response: THanks for your reviews! The story is finished....there are 4 chapters left plue an epilogue...so I will post 20 up today or tomorrow....and you'll see where Kevin's been and why...:)
Date: 08/28/05 09:47 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
I just love this story..
Date: 08/28/05 09:38 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
I was like: "Owh my God! He cannot die on 'me' (lol) like this!"