[Report This]Date: 09/27/05 09:16 pm Title: Ch. 4 - Slow Improvements
I have to say that i would be very upset with the boys too....but since they came to see me, i'd TRY to talk to them and understand that it was an accident and that they hadn't meant anything by it. its not like they did it on purpose. damn--i think they might be blowing it a LITTLe out of proportion. True, she may never be teh dancer she once was, but come on! lol great chapte,r i'm liking this story alot.
Author's Response: Nick was drunk at the wheel of the boat. Sure it might have been an accident, but it was a purposeful accident. Without his drinking, the accident could have been prevented. That might be another way to look at the situation and percipitating events.
Author's Response: Nick was drunk at the wheel of the boat. Sure it might have been an accident, but it was a purposeful accident. Without his drinking, the accident could have been prevented. That might be another way to look at the situation and percipitating events.
[Report This]Date: 09/27/05 07:16 pm Title: Ch. 3 - Cold Realities
aww....i feel so bad for the girls! How can Kevin act so heartless and cold though?? I thought he had a soft heart, & u guys are making him out to be some big ego bastard. The role just does not fit in my opinion. Great chapter, cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: The beauty of fan fiction is that you can portray your characters as any way you see fit. It may not be the normal "average" way that everyone portrays Kevin, but it gives our story a lot of character. It's interesting to see the boys in different aspects. And, if you read on, you will discover why Kevin is so "heartless."
[Report This]Date: 09/27/05 03:59 am Title: Ch. 15 - Questionable Relations
Lol. Poor Kev! UPDATE!!!!!! ~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 09/27/05 12:00 am Title: Ch. 2 - Coming to Grips
damn--shes pretty bitter..lol
[Report This]Date: 09/26/05 08:58 pm Title: Ch. 1 - Devastating Aftermath
wow....amazing chapter! i like this story so far.
[Report This]Date: 09/26/05 01:35 am Title: Ch. 15 - Questionable Relations
that was sooo good! i cant wait for another update!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 09/19/05 03:19 am Title: Ch. 14 - Swallowing Pride
Aww. KEVIN'S BACK!!!!! DUDE!!!! Can't be mad at him any longer anyway, man DID wave at me last Monday (Sept. 12th). Just - dude! I'm sorry - pile of mush since concert-lol. I REALLY gotta post my concert review up here, so EVERYbody can see WHY. lol. UPDATE!!!!!!! ~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 09/19/05 01:25 am Title: Ch. 14 - Swallowing Pride
such a great chapter! i love this story!!!!! no two AUTHORS COULD HAVE MADE A BETTER TEAM!!!!
[Report This]Date: 09/12/05 11:00 pm Title: Ch. 13 ? Chances Are
wow so good! update soon1
[Report This]Date: 09/08/05 02:28 pm Title: Ch 12 - Attempted Peacemaking
Aww. I feel horrible for Ann - she used to love Kevin. And WTF crawled up Kevin's ass & died? When'd he turn into such a work-a-holic asshole? He should be a sweetie pie - well, I think he's one - but I ain't met any of 'em yet-lol. Glad the other Boys are FINALLY making amends! And leave it to Nicky to think of cake! Lmao! UPDATE!!!!!! ~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 09/07/05 02:34 am Title: Ch 12 - Attempted Peacemaking
Kevin's really being an ASS!! I guess acting tough will appease his guilt. Howie's a doll!! Update soon!!
[Report This]Date: 09/06/05 11:52 pm Title: Ch 12 - Attempted Peacemaking
so good! uodate soon!
[Report This]Date: 08/31/05 03:59 pm Title: Ch. 11 - Starting Anew
that was such a good chapter! update soon!
[Report This]Date: 08/30/05 07:53 pm Title: Ch. 11 - Starting Anew
Ok, I feel horrible for Howie - no matter what he does, he's getting f*cked over. And A.J. IS too late, but I liked the way he caught Savvy before she fell. UPDATE!!!! ~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 08/16/05 08:00 pm Title: Ch. 10 - Changes of Heart
GO HOWIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE HOWIE!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!! ~Lenni~ P.S. See what happens when you're happy & rushed? You leave quick reviews-lol. GO HOWARD!!!!!!!!!
