Date: 12/21/05 01:34 am Title: Can't Make You Love Me
That was alright. It was a little confusing, but i liked the details about the ocean and the sky. those were nice. great job on it though, and i hope to see more from you soon.
Date: 05/30/05 02:32 am Title: Can't Make You Love Me
Hmm. Not a bad fic. I got kinda lost a bit at first, but once I'd re-read it, it made sense-lol. Your descriptions of the beach & where the sand was & stuff was pretty good. Sand clung to her dress - hehe. And tell Kev, I'ma love him, if he'll love me. Lol. ~Lenni~