[Report This]Date: 07/15/04 12:31 am Title: Ray Anne and Brian, Orphaned Souls
LOL, Oh my goodness girl, no you didn't. I remember reading this story and you started updating again, but I'm no where mean like you made me in the story, i'm like sugar, hehe,
[Report This]Date: 07/07/04 07:29 pm Title: Startling Events
I can't believe how Randall could do something so horrible to poor Jamelet. She's still bitchy, but at least there's some background info there. And Ray and Rok know Justin? This will add some conflict I believe. Its good that Ray made a girl friend too! great chapter!!
Author's Response: thanks for all your reviews! It actually helped inspire me to update again...reviews are great for that, so again thanks! :D
[Report This]Date: 07/07/04 07:01 pm Title: The Darkness Within
I can't believe Jamelet spread such a vicious rumor about Ray. And Nick and Alex fighting over her? Woah. I wonder how Ray is gonna react to that, although Alex's comment was pretty harsh about Nick not being able to keep her happy. Loved the chapter!
[Report This]Date: 07/05/04 03:34 pm Title: The Beat Goes On...
Oh-oh.... have a strange feeling there's going to be AJ, Nick and possibly Justin all fighting over Ray. Excited to find out. Jamelet is too quick to prejudge Ray. Wonder what is stuck up her ass. If I were Brian, I woulda decked her! lol. Addicted to this....you've got talent! I mean it!
[Report This]Date: 07/05/04 03:03 pm Title: And So It Begins...
Seems everyone is getting along for the most part. Jamelet has her perceptions on Ray totally wrong though! It seems SHE is the snobby one. And Nick needs more confidence, dude..;and know that people DO like him! Especially Ray. AJ is hilarious! Another great chapter! i'm telling ya....I am hooked!
[Report This]Date: 07/05/04 02:39 pm Title: Kevin Richardson & Alexander McLean, Overworked Souls
Sweet chapter...It seems Ray is making some new friends and Nick is gaining a little confidence by talking to her...possibly. AJ and Kevin have a bad home life too though? Jeez...and I am wondering what the significance of the pendants are? Hmmm...guess I'll have to read on to find out! lol. Great chapter...I can't stop readin this!
[Report This]Date: 07/05/04 12:03 pm Title: Nickolas Carter, Unloved Soul
Another wonderful chapter! Poor Nick...how can his parents be like that? But sadly, there are parents like that out there. It seems he's made some good friends at school at least though. Anyways, great job! Loving it so far!!!
[Report This]Date: 07/05/04 11:53 am Title: Ray Anne and Brian, Orphaned Souls
wow...amazing beginning. It's definitely caught my interest and is one of the best stories I've read. I feel sorry for Rae and Brian...and Nick. It seems that they all have problems in some way. I can't wait to read on! Again, great, great job!
[Report This]Date: 08/10/03 02:39 am Title: Ray Anne and Brian, Orphaned Souls
Oh man.I'm just cheking back on this site I found your story.I got a secret-I'm Bed Of Roses so yea I luv u.Continueon.Where's Brian and Howie?
[Report This]Date: 06/24/03 07:36 am Title: Startling Events
Figured I'd be the first one, because I really do love this fiction. I feel terrible for Jamelet. I guess sometimes there's a bitter truth in characters. However, great story nonetheless. Can't wait to see where the characters are taken - like mine! *heh* You know I enjoy your story. Just keep it going and we won't have nothing to complain about. I promise to pop you into one of my newer stories sooner or later. Great chapter - keep it going. You've definitely got the fire.
