Date: 10/03/05 07:12 pm Title: Can't Forget
WOW! How sad is that? Howie and this girl need to meet up, and that girl's boyfriend needs to be taken care of! and BOOOOO on the evil 'fan' who did that to him!
Date: 10/03/05 06:01 pm Title: Can't Forget
You are such a dork! Love it and I love ya too frick!
Date: 10/03/05 03:39 pm Title: Can't Forget
such an emotion-filled chapter...wow. Poor Howie...I can't believe that 'fan'...I was so happy for him when someone seemed to care and then...damn. Poor, sweet Howie. *sniffles* and damn....abusive relationships are always a bitch. ..I hope they both are okay, but doesn't seem like it. Another amazing chapter...please update soon!
Date: 10/03/05 03:15 pm Title: Can't Forget
OMG!! Poor Stephanie!!! OMG!! OMG!! Poor Howie!!!!! *tackles him in a hug* I'LL HAVE YOU, HOWIE!!!!! I've defneed you all these years!!!! UPDATE!!!1 ~Lenni~
Date: 10/03/05 12:03 pm Title: Deep Wounds
Well holy crappo. Talk about drama. This chap was good too. It was a bit hard for me to read, because of the references to Anorexia and cutting, but other then that, I liked it. You're doing good on this so far. Keep up the good work, Twinny! [Alex]
Date: 10/03/05 11:52 am Title: Like A Razor
Ooh, a new one from my Twinny! Good start to this. I'm excited to see new work from you! This was a very emotional chap, brought back memories and flashbacks from my own childhood and being teased by my peers at school. Keep up the good work! [Alex]
Date: 08/30/05 09:16 pm Title: Deep Wounds
Alright girl! Update again soon you got it!?!?!?
Date: 08/24/05 02:51 pm Title: Deep Wounds
Jeez..poor Stef...and Ana...they went through freakin hell! And Stef almost raped? Really great chapter. The descriptions are so vivid that I can actually see what is happening in my mind as I read. Update soon!
Date: 08/24/05 06:37 am Title: Deep Wounds
Stephee i love it! keep goin with it! UPDATE!
Date: 08/24/05 06:37 am Title: Like A Razor
AWESOME ! KEEP WRITING!!!!!
Date: 08/23/05 03:13 pm Title: Deep Wounds
You reworked that chapter, which is good. I really think if a character is going to be in the background for a great while in the story, then it's important to develop the character. At least I try to live by that sentiment anyway. But, otherwise, looks like Stephanie is in quite some pain. Hopefully she finds something to help her more than Ana is.
Date: 08/23/05 02:57 pm Title: Like A Razor
Howie was adorable as a little kid. Don't know how we're getting Ugly Troll outta the bunch, but I suppose I'm really biased. It's a really good start to what you'll make into an awesome story. I have no doubts about it. And quite smart to advance the torment of school in one chapter for background information.
Date: 08/23/05 06:02 am Title: Deep Wounds
damn...damn..damn..DAMN! is all i can say! why are guys such pigheaded jerks!? good chapter i LUVED IT!! i hope you update soon!!
Date: 08/23/05 05:49 am Title: Like A Razor
aww that made me cry!! How can anyone EVER think Howie is ugly!?? i think he's hot in his own way. everything blends so well with his features....astounding chapter, i luved it because ppl CAN be this cruel....i know.
Date: 08/22/05 11:52 am Title: Like A Razor
Kids can be such ASSHOLES! Poor Howie...I felt his pain as I was reading it. How could they treat such a sweet, gorgeous boy that way!?!? At least he's graduating and getting the hell out of there! Hopefully things will only get better for him from here on out. Update soon. I really like this!