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Reviewer: moppy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/07 03:39 pm Title: Moonlit Reflections

Hey this story really pulled me in. I figured out in the first chapter that something bad happened thought maybe they were dead but was 100% sure.
In the 2nd chapter it was comfirmed Brian's dead and no news about Nick but I'm wondering if Nick's like caught between dead or alive or maybe he went below and thats why he wasn't on the list, as it's assumed brian would go to heaven.
Are you ever gonna complete this story, I know it's been nearly 4 years since your last update but I hope (like other readers) that you would finish it.

Reviewer: KaySweet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/06 06:33 am Title: Dawn Breaking

Wow, intersting. Really sad though too.

Reviewer: Audra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/06 08:39 pm Title: Dawn Breaking

I love this story. Please tell me there's another chapter coming up. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: knky Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/06 08:59 pm Title: Dawn Breaking

Is that the end? Dude, this story is like, wow. You've got skills to write about *looks for a word to describe your plot, settings, etc.; comes up dead (haha)* Great job.

Reviewer: knky Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/06 08:33 pm Title: Moonlit Reflections

Oh my gaw. This story is very compelling, awesomely written. It's just too good. Should be published.

Reviewer: danielle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/06 12:59 pm Title: Dawn Breaking

come on dont leave us hanging1 write more

Reviewer: anderzpanderz Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/06 12:25 am Title: Moonlit Reflections

wow what an awesome story so far.... you have to update, i need to know what happenes!

Reviewer: Alexia Bone Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/21/05 09:19 pm Title: Dawn Breaking

fabulous update, i love this story! its so creative and i could have NEVER thought of something like this, ever. i hope you update soon..

Reviewer: Alexia Bone Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/21/05 09:03 pm Title: Moonlit Reflections

Oh my god, that was incredible. now i understand why the guys didn't talk to brian when they were searching the house for nick.. holy shit.. that was amazing, and you certainly have talent for writing.

Reviewer: Bianca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/05 06:52 pm Title: Dawn Breaking

Hey! Remember me??? LOL you forgot me!!! BUT HEY I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! SO MUCH!! YOU'VE GOT TO KEEP ON WRITING IT!!! Let me know when you do!! kissy!

Reviewer: Emanuel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/05 02:28 pm Title: Dawn Breaking

(clap clap) ENCORE ENCORE PLEASE!!!

Reviewer: Emanuel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/05 02:27 pm Title: Moonlit Reflections

(clap clap) ENCORE ENCORE PLEASE!!!!!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/05 12:31 am Title: Dawn Breaking

Why isn't Nick on the list? How'd they die? WTF!?!?! I'm SO lost now! I understood up until that dude came for Brian! UPDATE!!!!!! A.S.A.P.!!!!!! ~Lenni~

Reviewer: toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/04 06:52 am Title: Dawn Breaking

when are you going to finish this one? it sounds really exciting. i hope you finsh it soon okei. :)

Reviewer: Laura Mae Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/04 09:57 pm Title: Dawn Breaking

Only a couple of chapters, and I'm already hooked. Keep writing, please! :)