Date: 02/28/07 03:39 pm Title: Moonlit Reflections
Hey this story really pulled me in. I figured out in the first chapter that something bad happened thought maybe they were dead but was 100% sure.
In the 2nd chapter it was comfirmed Brian's dead and no news about Nick but I'm wondering if Nick's like caught between dead or alive or maybe he went below and thats why he wasn't on the list, as it's assumed brian would go to heaven.
Are you ever gonna complete this story, I know it's been nearly 4 years since your last update but I hope (like other readers) that you would finish it.
Date: 12/05/06 06:33 am Title: Dawn Breaking
Wow, intersting. Really sad though too.
Date: 09/13/06 08:39 pm Title: Dawn Breaking
I love this story. Please tell me there's another chapter coming up. I can't wait to read more.
Date: 07/31/06 08:59 pm Title: Dawn Breaking
Is that the end? Dude, this story is like, wow. You've got skills to write about *looks for a word to describe your plot, settings, etc.; comes up dead (haha)* Great job.
Date: 07/31/06 08:33 pm Title: Moonlit Reflections
Oh my gaw. This story is very compelling, awesomely written. It's just too good. Should be published.
Date: 07/09/06 12:59 pm Title: Dawn Breaking
come on dont leave us hanging1 write more
Date: 05/31/06 12:25 am Title: Moonlit Reflections
wow what an awesome story so far.... you have to update, i need to know what happenes!
Date: 12/21/05 09:19 pm Title: Dawn Breaking
fabulous update, i love this story! its so creative and i could have NEVER thought of something like this, ever. i hope you update soon..
Date: 12/21/05 09:03 pm Title: Moonlit Reflections
Oh my god, that was incredible. now i understand why the guys didn't talk to brian when they were searching the house for nick.. holy shit.. that was amazing, and you certainly have talent for writing.
Date: 07/19/05 06:52 pm Title: Dawn Breaking
Hey! Remember me??? LOL you forgot me!!! BUT HEY I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! SO MUCH!! YOU'VE GOT TO KEEP ON WRITING IT!!! Let me know when you do!! kissy!
Date: 07/05/05 02:28 pm Title: Dawn Breaking
(clap clap) ENCORE ENCORE PLEASE!!!
Date: 07/05/05 02:27 pm Title: Moonlit Reflections
(clap clap) ENCORE ENCORE PLEASE!!!!!
Date: 01/21/05 12:31 am Title: Dawn Breaking
Why isn't Nick on the list? How'd they die? WTF!?!?! I'm SO lost now! I understood up until that dude came for Brian! UPDATE!!!!!! A.S.A.P.!!!!!! ~Lenni~
Date: 12/17/04 06:52 am Title: Dawn Breaking
when are you going to finish this one? it sounds really exciting. i hope you finsh it soon okei. :)
Date: 08/26/04 09:57 pm Title: Dawn Breaking
Only a couple of chapters, and I'm already hooked. Keep writing, please! :)