Reviewer: Supreme OverLord Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/06 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 25 * Final Chapter *

aaahhhhhh daaaaaaaaaaamn
IDIOT dumb STUPID girl kill her self like that
will the Creep formally known as Nick, has gone to bed and for the next 300+ years will have a never ending loop of nightmares of getting screwed over and over again by Kath
I still cant get over Nath (im not going to forgive you for this) , but the poor boy had it coming
Bianca made a very difficult choice, and i mean difficult, loyalty over love no matter how every body may think Kath is the only one who knew how she really felt at the very end
Darcy on the other hand if i put my money on him from the beginning but im known to be a bad gambler :-)
he managed to raise up from the dinner special on the menu to co own the restaurant, this guy has gone where no other man of god has gone before ;-) Darcy still remains a mystery, tho his love and loyalty to Kath, he is the only one i wouldn't give my back to, switching sides this way may make him switch sides again in the future

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Date: 09/06/06 02:30 am Title: Chapter 22

I knew it, I mentioned this before, she would plot against her maker, Nath (my pretty boy) is seemed to be in love with B, but he doesnt know it that B is looking for some one powerful to replace the void that Kath left, she is aiming for Nick, (poor Nath) it is true that being a scum bag back stabbing creep like Nickolas gets all the fun

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Date: 09/06/06 01:40 am Title: Chapter 19

he was going to marry her ?!
he was going to marry her !!

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Date: 09/06/06 12:38 am Title: Chapter 17

God he really did it this time, I knew he was about to do some thing but not like this (creep), she lets her guard down for one moment and shows up, all this means one thing, Nath didnt get any that night (sad face)
the asshole had the chance but apperaintly he still had feelings for her where she moved on, he came in behind her, he had the chance but he decided to do a Romeo stunt
My advice to dear Nick, settle for Nath, Kath is out of his league now
talking about Leagues, its great seeing Darcy playing with the big boys now a few chapters ago he was that close too being a "special treat" for sweet B ( Go Darcy ) lets just hope it doesnt goes through his head and F things up

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/06 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 25 * Final Chapter *

wow...that was a shocker! Didn't expect Bianca to end her own life!

Author's Response: And wait this is only part one of a three part series hehe. I am glad that you liked it, keep an eye out for the second one

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/06 03:47 am Title: Chapter 22

oooh...drama! lol can't wait for more!

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Date: 08/02/06 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 15

First of all I just want to state for the record



SMOKIN BABY



Amazing turn of events here, from almost being a blood bank to Kath and Bianca and ended up being her boss its cool baby cool, but I'm sorry to say to me it didn?t last as long as I expected but there is other chapters on the way

I'm still waiting for Nath and Nick smoking session that would be interesting to read

Bianca feels left out, she was brought in the circle only to be left out at the corner I see an alliance with or a hot session with Nath very soon

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Date: 07/28/06 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 13

Very interesting

So as expected Darcy joined her side and as predicted his stocks just went through the roof, Bianca for the first time is threatened by some one else this might bring her to maybe plot to kill Darcy or probably betrayal