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Date: 07/28/06 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 12

Wow, now that?s some thing I couldn?t have seen coming, this proves Kath has a lot of power to spread around, I thought she would keep the boy to lure his master but tossing him out like garbage, she is like " I do what I want when I want " and poor Nath didn?t shake it hard enough to be on her good side, it seems that Nick thinks Kath is a better bed partner with Nath but Nath thinks other wise



There is Darcy he is hiding some where, he is lucky that his stocks with Kath just went up a few more points since the tossing of poor Nath, he doesn?t know it but he is slowly making his way up to Kaths heart



and yes lets not forget every body is going to feed tonight, there will be some pimpin !!!!!!!

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Date: 07/28/06 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 11

Poor Nath, he is getting it bad from both ends of the stick

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Date: 07/28/06 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 10

What I suspected is almost true as it appears from this chapter, Nath has a hidden agenda, and with the appearance of a new interesting character Angelina she is going to be a thorn in his side

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Date: 07/28/06 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 9

Darcy has a choice, but at the same time he has non, this chapter raises Darcy's stocks up a few points Nick is obviously afraid of him, Kath really wants him to be on her side better then against her, I think he holds the key for protecting Kath and her new playmate or the power to destroy Nick and his playmate

I'm really getting in to this

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Date: 07/28/06 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 8

So it begins, you are amazing, in a few chapter you have put the perfect equation for seduction, jealousy and betrayal

And whats really funny that Darcy is in the smack middle of every thing he is gonna regret ever leaving the church

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Date: 07/28/06 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 7

Nathaniel seems to be every bodies f**k boy, every body has a peace of him or should I say he has a peace out of every body ;) and Bianca is going to be the same since she is the new comer in the circle

Nathaniel in the other hand seems to have his own hidden agenda since every body is blinded when ever he walks in a room

Short but simply great chapter keep up the good work

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Date: 07/28/06 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 4

good chapter good stuff good stuff

I had a little problem keeping track of things in the beginning, and even got lost a few times but when things got back to the mansion every thing became clear

the way that Katharine keeps playing around with Bianca, they way she sips wine in front of her, she knows she is watching but does not look at her, she gives her the chance to look at her, to love her, to fall to her beauty, to make her want the forbidden

from the look of things Darcy is going to find out he is way out of his league, he is going to be between a rock and a hard place, or if he is lucky a blood donor to every body else

i guess things will get complicating later on for Katharine with her old love (i think) and her new infatuation with Bianca



man I cant wait to read the next chapter to see what happens next



Author's Response: I am glad that your enjoying it. I've worked hard on this story. I was beginning to think no one wanted to read it