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Reviewer: Melissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/05 08:02 am Title: chapter 1

the story line is soooo good! you might want to word on the grammar usage, tense shifting and punctuation. revise the words a bit and it will be near-perfect!

Reviewer: alexia bone Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/05 01:32 am Title: chapter 1

that was pretty good!! :)

Reviewer: Nichole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/05 12:55 am Title: chapter 1

Good job, your writing skills are good, keep writing