Date: 06/01/07 05:08 am Title: As We Lay
I really really liked that! Very great job
Date: 10/17/05 01:58 pm Title: As We Lay
This was absolutely one of the most beautiful short stories that I have ever read. I really enjoyed the sweet simplicity that you had going. No true high escalated drama, yet the pain was so centered into the core of the story. And the lyrics complimented beautifully.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you SO much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :)
Date: 10/17/05 03:18 am Title: As We Lay
that was really good! and so so sad!! aww i loved it though.
Author's Response: Thanks Alexia! :)
Date: 10/16/05 04:13 pm Title: As We Lay
OMG... That was... it made me cry... and when she whispered 'I love you' I actually said aloud "It's not f*ckin fair!"... Two enthusiastic thumbs up. Loved it. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And wow... if it made you cry, then that makes me happy! LOL :)