[Report This]Date: 11/17/05 03:14 am Title: Chapter Two
I've a bad feeling.... And I feel SO horrible for A.J.! It's gotta be SO hard, knowing things & being unable to do ANYthing abut them! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 11/17/05 01:44 am Title: Chapter Two
awesome chapter!!!!! i love the fact that its part of the trilogy!!! update soon!!!!
[Report This]Date: 11/16/05 11:17 pm Title: Chapter One
I think this is your first attempt at at Sci-Fi fiction. And, I really like the start we've got going. Didn't realize you were going to attach it to Permanent Tracings, but awesome nonetheless. Poor AJ, finally. Haha.
[Report This]Date: 11/16/05 11:04 pm Title: Chapter Two
this story is really starting to be good, i'm glad you made it the 3rd of the other two, but wouldn't AJ seen Howie's cutting problem and Brian's problem? Update soon?
Author's Response: aww...thanks. I didn't think that this chapter was that exciting...lol. Anywho..nobody knows Aj is psyhic. Before 3 days ago, this wasn't even going to be part of the series, but a separate story entirely. But you'll see what I have planned chapter by chapter. *grins* lol...its allll outlined out. hehe. Thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: 11/16/05 09:12 pm Title: Chapter Two
Oo, this is getting even better! More soon please!
Author's Response: aww...thanks for the review. Means lots to me! Hopefully I will have the next chapter up soon!
[Report This]Date: 11/16/05 08:32 pm Title: Chapter Two
GREAT update hun!! Now don't let us wait that long again.. lol.. ;)
Author's Response: Aww...thanks. I'll try to have the next chapter up soon...a week at the latest. I am going to try to have a new chapter of Fresh Start up tonight or tomorrow too! Thanks again
[Report This]Date: 11/16/05 08:20 pm Title: Chapter Two
:o....so YOUR the one causing the snow in ohio!!! lol. great update, ill love to see how you make us guess which boy it is.
Author's Response: haha! I live in Ohio too...near Columbus. Are you getting snow where you are? I havent seen any yet...but I have a feeling that I will by the end of the night. Anywho...in this story...there will be no guessing other than the mystery of what happens through AJ's visions...so it is suspense in that way. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 10/28/05 01:16 am Title: Chapter One
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
Damn! Those poor kids!!!!!!! Bet that one is grateful she lived - but she'll be in therapy for YEARS!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Remember...it is a vision AJ had about the future...it hasn't happened...yet. :-) I'll update soon!
[Report This]Date: 10/27/05 07:00 pm Title: Chapter One
this story sound really good, UPDATE soon.
[Report This]Date: 10/27/05 06:33 pm Title: Chapter One
awesome story! just so ya know, ill review here instead of mbsbfc :D
Author's Response: Awesome :) And thanks for the review! Are you going to the MBSBFC Concference in April?
[Report This]Date: 10/27/05 04:27 pm Title: Chapter One
awesome idea for a story!!!!!!! update real soon!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 10/27/05 04:27 pm Title: Chapter One
awesome idea for a story!!!!!!! update real soon!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 10/27/05 04:22 pm Title: Chapter One
Loved the chapter, can't wait to see where this will go.. :)
[Report This]Date: 10/27/05 04:07 pm Title: Chapter One
Oh wow!!!!! I am hooked! I can't wait to see what happens next...poor AJ for having to keep it all in!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Guess I did a good job making a catchy start? lol.
[Report This]Date: 10/24/05 06:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Aww. Poor A.J.... UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! ~Lenni~
