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Reviewer: Nijntje Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/05 04:56 pm Title: Chapter Six

Great chapter.. Willa being nice, now that can't last long..

Author's Response: No...not long at all...well...too long, but bengs Nick is bad at reading people...lol. Thanks for the review! I'll be back with Chapter 7 next week hopefully..till then, working on a chappy of Not So Bad

Reviewer: dancinpacer03 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/05 02:37 pm Title: Chapter Six

oh wow that was soooooo good!!!! i cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Was it really good, cuz I thought it was slow...lol...a little...grrr! Hopefull things will pick up in Chapter 9...the real drama begins...hahaha...*evil laugh* Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Anastacia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/05 03:34 am Title: Chapter Six

Moosie agrees with me that this chapter was absolutely wonderful. I want to say that Willa sounded sincere and maybe she isn't so terrible. But no Nick fan in her right mind would paint Willa as a good character. It's only a matter of time before her freak flag flies freely. The girls wedding dress shopping was amusing to say the least. Alter the shit out of the dress might have been my favorite quote. And then Howie and Gloria were so sweet. Totally have to wait for the guy to say those 3 little words first. That's a must! Even with an angel like Howie. And, Gloria suggesting Howie 'offing her ass,' can I tell you I was laughing hysterically? And I finally figured out what to get you for Christmas... Think Moosie just fell off my bed table... And... Oh! P.S. Moosie says she wants more of Howie and Gloria...Teehee

Author's Response: lol...thanks Ana! *hugs* Yes...WIlla is evil...I am not going to say I am making her nice because I LIKE her...there is reasoning for it..but only for EVIL! haha...and yes...alter the shit out of the dress, becaue lil Jaime is only 5 feet tall and 80 pounds. And I think I can manage more one on one Howie and Gloria time...according to the outline...haha...now I'm not going to spoil it for you. Wait n see! TTL girlie!