Date: 01/17/06 09:02 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Gloria and Anna are quite the duo. They're like a kind of ying and yang and I like that! But, holy shit, poor Kevin. (I am always saying poor ___ in your stories) AJ is so spastic and wild; there's no doubt he's probably going to start choking Kevin when he finds out Lauren is in the hospital. Of course, that's if Lauren even surprise. Nice little cliff, you jerk!
Date: 01/17/06 05:40 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Uh-oh.. damn, hope Lauren's gonna be alright...
Date: 01/04/06 07:38 am Title: Chapter Nine
Holy Hell...
Author's Response: Did I leave Ana speechless...*shocked face* I warned you that shit was about to hit the fan...and the drama begins...Thanks :)
Date: 01/03/06 04:13 am Title: Chapter Nine
nooooo. baby can't die. that would be so sad. Very good chapter though
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Since somebody other than Ana and dancinpacer reviewed...which is great, but as said at the end of 9...I can email them the chapters easily. I will keep posting for now. Just gets discouraging when nobody reviews! So thanks :) I appreicate it. You'll see what I have planned in future chapters...lets just say that it is the start of um..a lot of drama
Date: 01/03/06 12:51 am Title: Chapter Nine
oh my god i am so excited u updated!!!! update like really really soon!!!!
Date: 12/30/05 03:53 am Title: Chapter Eight
Seems typical that the boys were playing Go Fish. Just a little too amusing for words. Haha. Kevin and Anna are really sweet together, too. And, well, Laur is absolutely adorable. I can't wait to have kids!
Date: 12/29/05 10:48 pm Title: Chapter Eight
awesome chapter!!!!!!!! i love this story!!!!! cant wait to see what happens next!
Date: 12/12/05 11:03 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Damn, Moosie wasn't here to read the message with me. Nope, she's at home, curled on my bed, the damn brat... *sniffle* But *sigh* anyway, something about Brad just makes me eerie. Like he's too sweet or something... I don't know... I don't like Stephanie either, so, heh. Jamie and AJ are funny together. Nothing like cursing when you have a baby. Hell, my baby's first word will be a curse. Oh, and if Stephanie doesn't want her baby, Gloria will take it. HAHA!
Date: 12/12/05 06:31 pm Title: Chapter Seven
awesome chapter!!! u hyave tp update soon!!!
Date: 12/03/05 04:56 pm Title: Chapter Six
Great chapter.. Willa being nice, now that can't last long..
Author's Response: No...not long at all...well...too long, but bengs Nick is bad at reading people...lol. Thanks for the review! I'll be back with Chapter 7 next week hopefully..till then, working on a chappy of Not So Bad
Date: 12/03/05 02:37 pm Title: Chapter Six
oh wow that was soooooo good!!!! i cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Was it really good, cuz I thought it was slow...lol...a little...grrr! Hopefull things will pick up in Chapter 9...the real drama begins...hahaha...*evil laugh* Thanks for the review!
Date: 12/03/05 03:34 am Title: Chapter Six
Moosie agrees with me that this chapter was absolutely wonderful. I want to say that Willa sounded sincere and maybe she isn't so terrible. But no Nick fan in her right mind would paint Willa as a good character. It's only a matter of time before her freak flag flies freely. The girls wedding dress shopping was amusing to say the least. Alter the shit out of the dress might have been my favorite quote. And then Howie and Gloria were so sweet. Totally have to wait for the guy to say those 3 little words first. That's a must! Even with an angel like Howie. And, Gloria suggesting Howie 'offing her ass,' can I tell you I was laughing hysterically? And I finally figured out what to get you for Christmas... Think Moosie just fell off my bed table... And... Oh! P.S. Moosie says she wants more of Howie and Gloria...Teehee
Author's Response: lol...thanks Ana! *hugs* Yes...WIlla is evil...I am not going to say I am making her nice because I LIKE her...there is reasoning for it..but only for EVIL! haha...and yes...alter the shit out of the dress, becaue lil Jaime is only 5 feet tall and 80 pounds. And I think I can manage more one on one Howie and Gloria time...according to the outline...haha...now I'm not going to spoil it for you. Wait n see! TTL girlie!
Date: 12/01/05 02:31 am Title: Chapter Four
another excellent chapter keep up the great wrk
Date: 12/01/05 02:10 am Title: Chapter Three
excellent chapter!
Date: 12/01/05 01:58 am Title: Chapter 2
excellent chapter so very sad