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Reviewer: Anastacia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/06 09:02 pm Title: Chapter Ten

Gloria and Anna are quite the duo. They're like a kind of ying and yang and I like that! But, holy shit, poor Kevin. (I am always saying poor ___ in your stories) AJ is so spastic and wild; there's no doubt he's probably going to start choking Kevin when he finds out Lauren is in the hospital. Of course, that's if Lauren even surprise. Nice little cliff, you jerk!

Reviewer: Nijntje Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/06 05:40 pm Title: Chapter Ten

Uh-oh.. damn, hope Lauren's gonna be alright...

Reviewer: Anastacia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/06 07:38 am Title: Chapter Nine

Holy Hell...

Author's Response: Did I leave Ana speechless...*shocked face* I warned you that shit was about to hit the fan...and the drama begins...Thanks :)

Reviewer: rebecca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/06 04:13 am Title: Chapter Nine

nooooo. baby can't die. that would be so sad. Very good chapter though

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Since somebody other than Ana and dancinpacer reviewed...which is great, but as said at the end of 9...I can email them the chapters easily. I will keep posting for now. Just gets discouraging when nobody reviews! So thanks :) I appreicate it. You'll see what I have planned in future chapters...lets just say that it is the start of um..a lot of drama

Reviewer: dancinpacer03 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/06 12:51 am Title: Chapter Nine

oh my god i am so excited u updated!!!! update like really really soon!!!!

Reviewer: Anastacia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/05 03:53 am Title: Chapter Eight

Seems typical that the boys were playing Go Fish. Just a little too amusing for words. Haha. Kevin and Anna are really sweet together, too. And, well, Laur is absolutely adorable. I can't wait to have kids!

Reviewer: dancinpacer03 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/05 10:48 pm Title: Chapter Eight

awesome chapter!!!!!!!! i love this story!!!!! cant wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Anastacia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/05 11:03 pm Title: Chapter Seven

Damn, Moosie wasn't here to read the message with me. Nope, she's at home, curled on my bed, the damn brat... *sniffle* But *sigh* anyway, something about Brad just makes me eerie. Like he's too sweet or something... I don't know... I don't like Stephanie either, so, heh. Jamie and AJ are funny together. Nothing like cursing when you have a baby. Hell, my baby's first word will be a curse. Oh, and if Stephanie doesn't want her baby, Gloria will take it. HAHA!

Reviewer: dancinpacer03 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/05 06:31 pm Title: Chapter Seven

awesome chapter!!! u hyave tp update soon!!!

Reviewer: Nijntje Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/05 04:56 pm Title: Chapter Six

Great chapter.. Willa being nice, now that can't last long..

Author's Response: No...not long at all...well...too long, but bengs Nick is bad at reading people...lol. Thanks for the review! I'll be back with Chapter 7 next week hopefully..till then, working on a chappy of Not So Bad

Reviewer: dancinpacer03 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/05 02:37 pm Title: Chapter Six

oh wow that was soooooo good!!!! i cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Was it really good, cuz I thought it was slow...lol...a little...grrr! Hopefull things will pick up in Chapter 9...the real drama begins...hahaha...*evil laugh* Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Anastacia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/05 03:34 am Title: Chapter Six

Moosie agrees with me that this chapter was absolutely wonderful. I want to say that Willa sounded sincere and maybe she isn't so terrible. But no Nick fan in her right mind would paint Willa as a good character. It's only a matter of time before her freak flag flies freely. The girls wedding dress shopping was amusing to say the least. Alter the shit out of the dress might have been my favorite quote. And then Howie and Gloria were so sweet. Totally have to wait for the guy to say those 3 little words first. That's a must! Even with an angel like Howie. And, Gloria suggesting Howie 'offing her ass,' can I tell you I was laughing hysterically? And I finally figured out what to get you for Christmas... Think Moosie just fell off my bed table... And... Oh! P.S. Moosie says she wants more of Howie and Gloria...Teehee

Author's Response: lol...thanks Ana! *hugs* Yes...WIlla is evil...I am not going to say I am making her nice because I LIKE her...there is reasoning for it..but only for EVIL! haha...and yes...alter the shit out of the dress, becaue lil Jaime is only 5 feet tall and 80 pounds. And I think I can manage more one on one Howie and Gloria time...according to the outline...haha...now I'm not going to spoil it for you. Wait n see! TTL girlie!

Reviewer: Anita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/05 02:31 am Title: Chapter Four

another excellent chapter keep up the great wrk

Reviewer: Anita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/05 02:10 am Title: Chapter Three

excellent chapter!

Reviewer: Anita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/05 01:58 am Title: Chapter 2

excellent chapter so very sad