[Report This]Date: 03/28/07 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 10
What an interesting twist to have levelheaded Kevin turning to drugs... Not something I'd ever expect, but you seem to be making it work. Good job!
[Report This]Date: 08/02/06 03:20 am Title: Chapter 7
omg nooo please write more. I wasn't ready for it to end. Talk about a cliff hanger. The story is amazing.
[Report This]Date: 08/02/06 03:19 am Title: Chapter 7
omg nooo please write more. I wasn't ready for it to end. Talk about a cliff hanger. The story is amazing.
[Report This]Date: 05/13/06 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 8
This is a great story...can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 12/31/05 02:47 am Title: Chapter 8
As *IF* you left off THERE!!!!!! DAMMIT!!!! WHY'S Kevin hafta be SUCH an ass???? UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 11/05/05 06:17 am Title: Chapter 7
uh-oh.. You'd think Kevin was smarter than to believe the newspaper.. :-s Update soon..
[Report This]Date: 10/31/05 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
It would be tough coping with the fact that your unborn child may have heart defects. And nerve racking not knowing how bad it is until the baby is born. I'm glad to see that kevin and Jenn are finally working the relationship thing out and I have a feeling there could be a ring landing on her finger sometime in the near future. Keep up the good work and update soon! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 10/31/05 01:17 am Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter again.. It's sad though that their child's not in the best health.. :(
[Report This]Date: 10/31/05 12:10 am Title: Chapter 5
We NEED to find out!! I'm on the edge of my seat..
[Report This]Date: 10/30/05 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 2
Uh-oh.. it's sad that he feels/is ignored.. :(
[Report This]Date: 10/30/05 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
You got me curious.. really really curious..
[Report This]Date: 10/30/05 12:12 am Title: Chapter 5
Haha, Jenn. Nice little Author's Note at the end there. Again, another intense chap. Lots of emotions and the works all intertwined. I think I need a cigarette now after reading that chap and I am going to go have one after I finish this review. Seems like this story keeps getting more intense with each chap. Keep up the good work and update soon because I want to know what's gonna happen next! [Ashley]
Author's Response: I just got off the phone with Sara...and shes gonna try to send me chapter 6...and ill post it as soon as i get it...*hands you lighter* its only gonna get worse...i think...
[Report This]Date: 10/30/05 12:03 am Title: Chapter 4
Go jenn, rip Kevin a new freakin' butthole while you're at. Someone needs to send the guy back into reality. Very intense chap I have to say. Keep up the good work! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 10/29/05 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
Well holy heck. I was right about Jenn being pregnant. The clues were all there, so no surprise. But this is a definite change for Kevin's character, being addicted to drugs that is. And that attitude he's playin'...keep up the good work! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 10/29/05 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
I do have to say I agree that Jenn and Kevin have a bit of a twisted relationship. I'm curious to know what's going on with Jenn, although I'm pretty sure I already know. Keep up the good work! [Ashley]
Author's Response: Oh...and this one is all Sara. She gets a few of the ideas from me...but its all her...and she wont tell me what her plans are!! boooooo...anyways....it is a bit twisted...but...its good at the same time...hehe...ill let Sara know what you think once she gets home from work...
Jenn
