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Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/13 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 26

Yes Kevin....investigate. Good Kevin. She is slipping up and hopefully people will realize she isnt so nice after all.

Author's Response:

LOL See? Kevin's catching on! :O)

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/13 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 26

Lol. That's supposed to be about Kevin finally getting suspicious of Ariana. When he was starting to buy into her BS while they were camping, it was just weird.

Author's Response:

Oh, I was like "Did I have Kevin get lost in the woods or something? I don't remember doing that." lmao

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/13 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 26

Welcome back, Kevin!  I'm glad we didn't totally lose you out there in the woods.



Author's Response:

LOL yay once again I have no clue!

Reviewer: waj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/06 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 26

ok, thank god Kevin's sussing her out...Hopefully, he'll figure things out soon.

Author's Response: LOL

Reviewer: Anita Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/12/06 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 26

ha so kevin finally suspects something on her well its about time i was about to smack him for being so dumb!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/06 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 26

How DARE she do that to Nicky!!!! The poor kid is gonna end up havin' a heart-attack at fifteen!!! And it seems he's known all along that it was Arianna, he was just too little to put it all together!!!!

They NEED to figure it out before somebody gets seriously hurt!!!! Damn KEvin Sr. to Hell for hiding his double life!!! It's HIS fault this shit is happening to Nicky & the other boys!!!! It's HIS fault Mrs. Richardson got killed!!!! DAMN HIM TO HELL!!!!!!

Ariana better BACK off & leave Nicky & the others be!!!! Or *I'M* gonna go after her with a freakin' baseball bat!!!!

And Charlie!!! Holy crap boy!!!! Get a grip!!! Yes, your sister was killed, but NOT by Howie!!!! HIS WIFE DID IT!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!

Not too soon though, I'm attempting to catch up & have two more chapters to read later. Lol.

~Lenni~

Author's Response: Aww thanks for the feedback Lenni!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/06 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 26

Eep! Ariana is such a bitch! How DARE she do that to poor Nicky!!!! Yes, I'm attempting to catch up & will hafta continue to do so later tonight. Lol.

I hope thye figure it out SOON before somebody gets seriously hurt!!!! Or Nicky has a heart-attack at fifteen!!!! Dammit!!!!

SAVE THE RICHARDSONS & HOWIE!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can't believe Kevin Sr. just murdered her folks in cold lbood!!! And she's his kid!!!!! Holy crap!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!

Haha. Not soon, I have two or so chapters left to read.

~Lenni~

Author's Response: I know she is a bitty, isn't she? lol

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/06 12:54 am Title: Chapter 26

FINALLY....Kevin is on to something. Sorry it took me so ong to read this one! I kinda had a blonde moment...and missed it somehow. But I found it and such an amazing chapter! Ariana is horrid! She needs to fall in a hole and die, die, DIE! Glad Howie is alright though. I thought he was gonna be severely brain damaged there...

Author's Response: Aww I could never brain damage Howie. *pets Howie* lol

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/06 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 26

yey, yey yey!!! a new chapter!!!

what can I say but LOVED IT!!!!

Author's Response: Aww thanks Kim! :O)

Reviewer: mers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/06 03:51 am Title: Chapter 26

I LOVE this chapter. I LOVE to hate Ariana/me and man it feels GOOD to see her slipping just a little :D My fav part will have to be when Kevin realised Ariana's little but very important slip about the 'kid'. Before he even mentioned that out loud, I was getting a little confused why Kevin kept on asking her the same question so many times (im no nancy drew, lol) so yeah, it was a WOAH moment for me :D Cant wait for hte next chappy!!!

Author's Response: LOL I'm Nancy Drew and there can't be two of us. You are Bess :O)

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/06 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 26

PLEASE catch ariana!

pst....im workin on my reviews for that other story....i just need to send out the email

Author's Response: LOL aww it's okay Felicia sometimes I just have to get all teacher like over there.

Reviewer: ALM Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/21/06 09:23 am Title: Chapter 26

oh yes x it is about time Kevin

Author's Response: LOL

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/06 07:29 am Title: Chapter 26

Yes yes yes yes.. *jumps up and down* Kevin is finally doing his job ;o)

Author's Response: Aww he's not that bad at his job! LOL

Reviewer: Alana Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/06 04:35 am Title: Chapter 26

Yay, great chapter! Good Kevin for finally starting to suspect her.

Author's Response: LOL YAY