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Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/13 11:37 am Title: Chapter 29

Okay a few things: what is with these psycho people and the winking???

Lmao at the sombrero, I can see AJ doing that...I am glad the boys are figuring out Ariana but now Nick and Patty are about to be in danger :/

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/13 11:36 am Title: Chapter 29

Okay a few things: what is with these psycho people and the winking???

Lmao at the sombrero, I can see AJ doing that...I am glad the boys are figuring out Ariana but now Nick and Patty are about to be in danger :/

Author's Response:

I wasn't aware I did! I guess maybe in my mind they are winking type people? At least I don't have her stroking a cat! LMAO You've always got to include a sombrero in a hospial scene!

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/13 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 29

LOL at AJ and the maracas, and I liked the line about Charlie knowing he was living on borrowed time.



Author's Response:

LOL thanks! Every good suspense story needs a scene that includes maracas, a sombrero and a pinata! :O)

Reviewer: A.W. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/06 05:28 am Title: Chapter 29

I love everything about this story please update asap please!!!!

Author's Response: aww thanks! :O)

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/06 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 29

Now I can't wait to see what will happen next!!lol...When are u updating again?? Can't wait to see what'll happen next!! Loving the story mare.

Author's Response: Thank you! :O)

Reviewer: Anita Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/12/06 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 29

another excellent chapter im glad i am caught up with this

Author's Response: Thanks Anita!

Reviewer: mers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/30/06 08:27 am Title: Chapter 29

oh Ariana is evil! and one of them is going to die! I always said i wish Charlie could redeem himself and if being killed means he'd do just that, then yeah, i guess im okay with it (cause otherwise, you're killing Patty and we dont want Patty dead, Nick already lost his mom :()

LOL @ Brian. I wouldnt want to be left alone and unable to defend myself against Brian and his antics either! Great chap, looking foward to the next update :D

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/30/06 02:48 am Title: Chapter 29

Oye vey. A.J.!!!! DAMMIT!!!! TELL KEVIN!!!!!!!!!! YEESH!!!! WHAT is WITH you Richardson's & NOT telling each other VERY important information!!!!!

RUN NICKY!!!!! RUN!!!!! TAKE PATTY & CHARLIE WITH YOU!!!!!! RUN!!!!! (haha. had to think of patty's name-took me a moment)

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: lmao aww lol you always crack me up Lenni!

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/30/06 12:25 am Title: Chapter 29

So who is going to die? It could be anybody...*sniffles* u cant kill Nicky off....or Patty. Charlie...well, i think deep down, he is decent. Just got mixed up in some horrible shit that he wants out of desperately. Please update soon. Ariana is up to no damned good...and I have a feeling something HUGE is coming. Love the story!

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/06 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 29

uh oh.....*hugs nicky to keep him safe* i dont care if hes with patty too lol

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/06 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 29

I love it, as usual.. could you lend me some of your talent? ;)

Author's Response: Aww wow I can't belueve I never saw these reviews! lol ugh I SUCK!! lol