Date: 07/24/13 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 33
Yikes, lots going on here. I like she doesn't want to hurt them but she's still psycho for these damn mind games. My heart can't handle any more Nick abuse lol
Author's Response:
I know! She's complex and poor Nick! :O(
Date: 07/12/13 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 33
My favorite part of this chapter was Patty and the ringing phone. "Please call back" about gave me chills.
Author's Response:
aww, poor Patty! And thanks! :O)
[Report This]Date: 03/27/07 06:33 am Title: Chapter 33
I love this story, Please update as soon as possible,thank you!!!!
Author's Response: I just did :O)
[Report This]Date: 03/19/07 03:58 am Title: Chapter 33
wow great update. just got back from vac. couldn't wait to read them keep up the great work
Author's Response: thank you
Date: 03/16/07 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 33
o_O means something like > I'm just speechless.. o_O are two eyes, and one just seems to almost pop out.. Out of speechlessness or amazement.. ;) Great chap again!
Author's Response: thanks!
[Report This]Date: 03/16/07 04:56 am Title: Chapter 33
He looked over at her and nodded, there wasn’t much else he could do really. He then turned his attention back to his baby brother who lay quiet and still next to him. “I don’t want that guy anywhere near Nick again, do you understand me?” AJ said, hate shining from his eyes, “I don’t even want him looking at Nick.”
OMG! i can totally picture this in my head and omg! i cant stop omg-ing everywhere!
and im sorry, but i have no place right now to feel sorry for Ariana (me, whatever, lol). She needs to do A LOT to redeem herself because she didnt think twice to poison Nick and frame him and now, now she wants to coddle Nick and wonders/wishes her brothers could love her? 2 kids lives are at stake because of all these! and hello? she's willing to off Kevin! big bro! no way! lol...
the boyfriend has to go though. For Howie man, do it for Howie! lmao!!
[Report This]Date: 03/16/07 02:23 am Title: Chapter 33
omg GREAT chapter mare you are the bomb and i am THRILLED at the update so soon! im waiting for 13th step and why and another scars so step on it
[Report This]Date: 03/15/07 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 33
Oh, wow. That was a really good chapter. And the last one. I'm so glad Patty survived, if nothing else, she could tell them what really happened. And, when is Kevin and Brian gonna realise what's really going on. Thanx for the updates Mare.
Author's Response: aww you're welcome and I have a feeling that very soon they will start to catch on lol
[Report This]Date: 03/15/07 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 33
better ending...but still a cliffy! thank god patty WAS awake! they better find everyone FAST!
Author's Response: Thanks Felikia. I didn't think that was a cliffy at all lol I was so proud of myself too.
