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Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/13 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 40

Poor Nick living the fire crap all over again....if this kid didn't need therapy before ge sure will now!!!

Author's Response:

Yeah, I think that's safe to say. lol

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/10 05:45 am Title: Chapter 40

YAY! I most certainly did NOT forget about these updates :) I've been out of town and am now catching up! I'm so glad they were able to trace the call and I hope they can get there quickly! I love the beginning with AJ being a smartass to Ariana telling her how to start a fire. LOL. It seems so...AJ. The parts with AJ and Nick are sweet and I hope that they'll both be ok in the end. I definitely feel for Howie in all this mess as well. Seems like he's believing the guys now though. Can't wait to see how you wrap this all up although I'll be sad to see it end.

And don't get discouraged!! You're doing such an awesome job and you're so close to the end!! I'm sure you have more readers that just aren't reviewing although I'm not sure WHY people don't review. lol. But either way, I'm loving what you've done with this whole series and I know I'm not the only one. You're an awesome writer...one of my favorites!! Can't wait to see another update :)

Author's Response:

Thanks Sel! I'm feeling much better because of awesome people like yourself. I just needed to have my pity party for one. lol Glad you're liking what you've read and I hope the end won't disappoint you guys!

Reviewer: Sam_noelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/10 12:26 am Title: Chapter 40

YAY they know where they are now, I love the AJ and Nick part of this story too. Really, only one more chapter?? You could extend this as long as you want you know for... suspenseful intrigue, or writing practice, OR for your reader's pure enjoyment of this story and all it's characters... just puttin' that out there. lmao j/k

There is a lot of wrap up left, I mean besides saving the boys, there's all the shit Arianna did to their family, like killing their mom, I mean Nick is still the only one that knows about that. Don't let a lack of feedback discourage you Mare, you're an amazing storyteller with some really creative ideas, and keep in mind that there might be some people just seeing this and starting the series for the first time now, they need to catch up.lol Your writing is truly loved in the fanfic world Mare, so don't get down on yourself, your readers really appreciate your hard work, trust me. ; )

Author's Response:

Yes, literally reader's enjoyment as in one reader, sometimes two if i'm having a good day lol I am so happy you don't want this story to end Sam, but honestly I should have never even started it. I should have ended it with Protect and Serve. No worries, all the loose ends will tie up by the end. I'm still not sure if it'll all end in one chapter. It might be a very long chapter 40 or it will go one more after that. Reguardless, I'll finish the damn thing! I promise! Or you can send Ariana after me! LOL

Thanks for the words of encouragement. You always make me feel better! You're awesome and are seriously one of the reasons I came back to writing at all! So again, I owe you a lot of thanks! I do hope this story gets some new readers. That would be nice :O)

Okay pity party over! lol I did manage to write a little more on it today so hopefully the update will be semi on time! If you haven't noticed, I work best when I force myself to have a schedule.