Date: 07/25/13 01:46 am Title: Chapter 43
Beautiful chapter, I think their dad has a lot of insecurities due to the whole Ariana thing and it came to a head but he will get better from here on. I really feel bad for Howie having realized his wife did those things and then seeing it for himself :(
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah, I think it'll take a long time for Kevin Sr. and Howie to get over all that has happened. :O( Lot's of therapy lol
Date: 07/16/13 11:24 am Title: Chapter 43
Well, I do think Ariana had to go. What I wasn't expecting was for her husband to do it! I like that turn of events from a literary standpoint. Gives it an emotional depth that wouldnt necessarily be there otherwise, especially after seeing Ariana's true feelings in that she actually loved him. As per the overarching theme....poor Howie. But also blessed Howie, since he has the support of that family.
Author's Response:
I knew I was going to kill her off but I wasn't really sure how I was going to do it. I figured in the end, Howie being the one to do it was the most justified so I went with that. I wanted to make sure she was rescued from the car by her brothers to give her a chance to redeem herself, but when she didn't then it was okay for me to off her! LOL yes, Howie really doesn't have it easy in this story. Poor guy! Im' sad you're one chapter away from being done! This has been fun!
Date: 08/24/10 10:12 am Title: Chapter 43
i think this is the meanest you've ever done to Howie. I want to put him in my pocket and sing him songs all day long. I'm not crazy.
to be in his position is just...sigh.
Author's Response: aww, well I almost killed him, so Howie got off easy this time! LOL
Date: 08/21/10 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 43
wow hope the boys will give their father, im really said it coming to a end but you know what they say all good things must come to a end.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and for sticking with the story for all this time! :O)
