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Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/13 02:41 pm Title: 11

Charlie is such an ass. he's Nadia's brother....interesting. Lots of interesting stuff in this chapter.

Author's Response:

Yup! They are brther and sister. Thanks, Tracy!

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/13 11:37 pm Title: 11

Oh! Nadia is Charlie's sister! Wow, didn't see that one coming. I like this Charlie character. I think I've already said that before. Haha. And I hate to see Kevin Sr. when he gets called about Nick "shoplifting." Now, he's a character I'm having a hard time liking, actually.

Author's Response:

YAY glad to know you didn't figure that out beforehand! And I'm also happy to know you aren't liking Kevin senior because that was my intent. I wanted him to come across hard to read and unlikable. Poor shoplifting Nick lol

Reviewer: Anita Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/06 02:50 pm Title: 11

omg his sister! how freaky i never saw that coming and that the police killed her!

Reviewer: mersey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/06 01:13 am Title: 11

omg! i guessed something right for ONCE! woohoo!!! right at the end, when this mystery character was talking to Nadia's mom, I instantly remembered Charlie, lmao. So it's his sister who died. It's all connected! *rubs chin* how the plot thickens yo! and Nicky is in a huge trouble; wonder how he's going to get himself out of this and explain the truth to his family! How naive of me to actually celebrate when he joked with Brian and his dad about going out to buy ice cream! lol. And AJ dude....DO IT DO IT DO IT! lol

Author's Response: LOL aww yay Nancy but of course you guessed right because you are me dude! :OP

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/06 07:30 pm Title: 11

ooooo!!! That Charlie kid needs a good kick in the you know what!!!! How could he do that to my poor Nicky!! and I can't believe that Nadia was his sister. WOW what a suprise!!! I have a feeling that Nick is in a lot more trouble with Charlie now that Nadia is dead. update soon!! I just gotta see what will happen next. :)

Author's Response: Thanks Kim, hopefully this Friday :O)

Reviewer: waj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/06 06:26 pm Title: 11

Oh my god! I am so shocked...I can't believe it, they're related?? I knw I shouldn't be this shocked, I mean how many twists and turns has there been? But bloody hell!! And, Kevin Sr's going back to work!! Nick is gonna flip! I can't wait for the next chap!! Hurry!!!!! lol.

Author's Response: LOL Aww thanks Waj

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/06 05:19 pm Title: 11

Oh, how lovely. Now Charlie's gonna go after Nick just 'cause his brothers are F.B.I. Agents - &, well, soon to be his father again as well. If they're all such good F.B.I. Agents, then WHY can't they see people are after Nicky again & that Howie's STUPID wife is the cause of it all!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~Lenni~

Author's Response: LOL I never said that were good FBI agents :OP

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/06 04:41 pm Title: 11

Holy hell....So Nadia is Charlie's sister? ANd her mother said that the POLICE killed her? Like fucking hell they did! That bitch needs locked up...she is a psychotic deamon with no feelings at all! And poor Nicky getting caught for something he didnt even do. The worst part is...Kevin Sr. will think he really did shop lift because he is always so troubled...but not a bad kid like everyone thinks! Poor lil guy. Loved the chapter though. Please update soon. This ending was not cool...very mean...grr!

Author's Response: Aww lol i'm a meanie, I can't help it. :O)

Reviewer: ALM Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/06 04:33 pm Title: 11

WOW what a big surpise Nadia was charlie sister still dont like him and how could to that to Nick, Charile needs a good kick in anyway keep up the good work

Author's Response: LOL yay I like surprises :O)