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Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/13 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 24

I almost feel sorry for her but wow, she had to do with Nick's kidnapping too?? That's insane, I am really glad AJ is starting to think and so.is Kevin.

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Yes, maybe they are all finally cluing in a bit. Too bad that can't all be like their Sherlock Holmes brother. Thanks, Tracy!

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/13 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 24

Ooh, Charlie's back!  Apparently I'm still a psycho, because I still like this character so much!  He's a twisted little dude, but there's some sympathy for him, too. 



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Yeah, I agree. but I am also a psycho lol

Reviewer: waj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/06 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 24

Hey Mare!! I'm still alive...lol. I haven't been online much for a while now and I'm ASHAMED to see just how behind I am with this story!!! Only 5 more chapters left, huh? lol. Ok, focusing on the story...I'm feeling SO bad for Nicky...Poor guy, I can't believe that he has to keep the fact Ariana is his mother's murderer a secret! And Howie...why are u so easily manipulated???? But I am loving AJ...So, onto the next chapter now. hehe...

Author's Response: Aww thanks for all the reviews waj! :O)

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/06 02:14 am Title: Chapter 24

great chapter!!!! please update soon

Author's Response: thanks Kim :O)

Reviewer: A.W. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/06 03:14 am Title: Chapter 24

LOve the cliffhanger, please update when you can.

Author's Response: Aww thanks! Yay someone who actually loves the cliffhangers! :O)

Reviewer: Just Marina Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/06 01:23 am Title: Chapter 24

Wow! Okay, yes, this chapter was a 'wow chapter' too. I really can't wait for the next one so please hurry up lol Oh and you know what I enjoy the most about this chapter, right? I'm sure you do ;)

Author's Response: when Kevin juggles the cats naked? :OP lol

Reviewer: mers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/06 03:44 am Title: Chapter 24

BRILLIANT CHAPTER! And it's long too, I love how when i read it, it just keeps on going to a point where i wish it just never ends, no cliffy wahtsoever. Poor Charlie, I bet he'll be in a right state when he finds out who Ariana is. And Now I?m worried over Howie! And YAY to AJ, I really hope he?s going to approach Nick and asked him about that little scribble. And I really hope Howie keeps his mouth shut about the drug, because mersey cannot stand another defamation on Nick *pats his head* and maybe Brian is on I got shot vacation, so I hope he gets his ass back in gear and figure something out as well, lmao! And the whole noticing the cellphone on his left back pocket and nick being right handed?very good detective job Kevin! And I?m beginning to not like Dad and wish Jackie is here :(

Author's Response: Aww thanks for all of that! :O) You rock, as always! I wish Jackie was there too! *kicks evil you*

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/06 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 24

Oh god...When Charlie and Ariana are both involoved, nothing can go good. It sounds like Howie might be actually a little suspicious about things now...and AJ is catching on. But will Nick tell the truth if asked? Awesome chapter

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/06 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 24

Oh god...When Charlie and Ariana are both involoved, nothing can go good. It sounds like Howie might be actually a little suspicious about things now...and AJ is catching on. But will Nick tell the truth if asked? Awesome chapter

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/06 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 24

Oh god...When Charlie and Ariana are both involoved, nothing can go good. It sounds like Howie might be actually a little suspicious about things now...and AJ is catching on. But will Nick tell the truth if asked? Awesome chapter

Author's Response: Thanks :O)

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/06 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 24

Well, I'm still here ;) Great chapter!

Author's Response: YAY!! thanks :0)

Reviewer: Anita Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/06 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 24

Omg what a chapter! So great but the ending was intense. You are so good Mare

Author's Response: aww thanks Anita! :O)

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/06 06:08 am Title: Chapter 24

wow.....great chapter! *hands you goobers and gobstoppers* :D

Author's Response: yay!! goobers AND gobstoppers! :O)