Date: 07/25/13 01:32 am Title: Chapter 41
I really love AJ in this chapter, he was very resourceful. Ariana isn't as smart as she puts on if she didn't think AJ would outsmart her, I loved the action in this chapter!
Author's Response:
Yeah, my one regret in this story is the fact that I actually made Ariana think AJ was going to burn himself to death. Like, Duh! lmao but obviously I had to do that because I couldn't really figure out how else to leave him alive. Thanks, Tracy!
Date: 07/24/13 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 40
Poor Nick living the fire crap all over again....if this kid didn't need therapy before ge sure will now!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I think that's safe to say. lol
Date: 07/24/13 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 39
I guess manipulating kinda runs in the family....go Kevin for lying as a distraction. yay Howie for really thinking about his wife too!
Author's Response:
So now you are over the 2 year hiatus I took on this story. I bet you're glad you weren't reading this at the time. LOL
Date: 07/24/13 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 37
Yes Howie!!!! He isn't so blind after all. I totally should be sleeping but wow. I am really hooked on kind of an adrenaline rush....I love how real this is.
Author's Response:
YAY! Thanks! That is the best thing to hear! :O)
Date: 07/24/13 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 36
The fact Nick has a Inspector Gadget ringtone made me all nostalgic. I used to watch that show as a kid. I hope to God things dont turn to the worse but I should kind of expect it after everything shouldn't I?
Author's Response:
It seemed to fit him! LOL You know things always get worse before they get better. ;O)
Date: 07/24/13 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 35
Good Kevin. Find your brothers....I think Nick almost feels sorry for Ariana but that is not any reason to harm the family....damn this is frustrating.
Author's Response:
Aww I know! lot's of emotions going on I can imagine, if I was them which thankfully I'm not but I guess since I wrote it I am. Thanks for all the reviews! Wow! You are plowing through this one!
Date: 07/24/13 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 34
Nick waking up being all scared and confused made me so sad :( this crazy woman acting like she's adopting him. I also think Kevin Sr. needs to stop reading so much into his kids actions....I think he is having a hard time adjusting to being back just like they are.
Author's Response:
Kevin senior definitely needs to stop with the pity party and be there for his kids!
Date: 07/24/13 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 33
Yikes, lots going on here. I like she doesn't want to hurt them but she's still psycho for these damn mind games. My heart can't handle any more Nick abuse lol
Author's Response:
I know! She's complex and poor Nick! :O(
Date: 07/24/13 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 32
The craziest part of this is Ariana talking about ordering a freaking pizza while AJ is handcuffed to a chair and Nick is being kidnapped. Holy mother of god this woman. I also knew Charlie would get hurt at some point...
Author's Response:
Well, even psychos have to eat, right? LMAO
Date: 07/24/13 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 31
oh man things just got real!!! Poor Nick and AJ.
Author's Response:
I know! I seem to torture AJ a lot in this one too! LOL At least Nick isn't alone!
Date: 07/24/13 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 30
It's all happening again, Nick is older and smarter now though, hopefully that will get him out of this. I can't wait to see how this plays out!
Author's Response:
Aww I know! Probably the type of deja vu he's not really desiring much! thanks, Tracy!
Date: 07/24/13 11:37 am Title: Chapter 29
Okay a few things: what is with these psycho people and the winking???
Lmao at the sombrero, I can see AJ doing that...I am glad the boys are figuring out Ariana but now Nick and Patty are about to be in danger :/
Date: 07/24/13 11:36 am Title: Chapter 29
Okay a few things: what is with these psycho people and the winking???
Lmao at the sombrero, I can see AJ doing that...I am glad the boys are figuring out Ariana but now Nick and Patty are about to be in danger :/
Author's Response:
I wasn't aware I did! I guess maybe in my mind they are winking type people? At least I don't have her stroking a cat! LMAO You've always got to include a sombrero in a hospial scene!
Date: 07/24/13 10:11 am Title: Chapter 28
I was practically biting my nails during this chapter, Nick wpuld make a great detective himself if Kevin let him LOL.
Author's Response:
yes, he really would! Thanks, Tracy!
Date: 07/24/13 02:05 am Title: Chapter 27
Oh Charlie :/ i hope they catch him before he ends up dead!!!
Author's Response:
:-/ lol
