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Date: 07/23/13 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 26

Yes Kevin....investigate. Good Kevin. She is slipping up and hopefully people will realize she isnt so nice after all.

Author's Response:

LOL See? Kevin's catching on! :O)

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Date: 07/23/13 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 25

Now everything is starting to make sense, why Nick got sick at the friendly's and what happened to Lisa.....all part of this chick's agenda. Holy crap I didn't see any of that information coming.

Author's Response:

YAY! Always glad to know when I have surprised people! :O)

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Date: 07/23/13 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 24

I almost feel sorry for her but wow, she had to do with Nick's kidnapping too?? That's insane, I am really glad AJ is starting to think and so.is Kevin.

Author's Response:

Yes, maybe they are all finally cluing in a bit. Too bad that can't all be like their Sherlock Holmes brother. Thanks, Tracy!

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Date: 07/23/13 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 23

Oh no....I feel so bad for Nick, he knows everything but nobody believes him. I hope AJ starts piecing stuff together though, now that he saw Nick's notes on Ariana. This is getting so good!

Author's Response:

Yup, thank goodness for AJ, right?

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Date: 07/23/13 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 22

What a manipulative bitch....poor Nick...nobody believes him, not even Kevin :(

Author's Response:

I know! I actually got frsutrated with that myself when I finally reread this story! LOL

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Date: 07/23/13 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 21

Ooohhh that woman gives me the creeps.

Author's Response:

good! lol

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Date: 07/23/13 06:35 am Title: Chapter 20

Nick wanting to be by his brothers.was very sweet and adorable, but I wish he'd told Kevin about the aconite. I also hate how gullible Howie is, his wife is psychotic. i hope Nick can expose her before she makes him look like the bad guy!!

Author's Response:

She is a looney tunes! So we'll have to wait and see! Thanks, Tracy!

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Date: 07/22/13 09:15 am Title: Chapter 19

Nick is about to get himself into more trouble :/ i kinda want to smack him but I'd really like to slap Ariana!!!

Author's Response:

Yup, of course! LOL Thanks again, Tracy!

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Date: 07/22/13 08:56 am Title: Chapter 18

Oh wow....Ariana must have used that stuff to kill Jackie too!!! I like Nick's detective skills in this chapter!

Author's Response:

He was very Sherlock Holmes in that one! LOL

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Date: 07/22/13 08:43 am Title: Chapter 17

Not Howie :( why pick on poor Howie, he didn't do anything. Aggghhh.

Author's Response:

I know! :O( Poor Howie!

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Date: 07/22/13 08:37 am Title: Chapter 16

I really cannot wait to find out why she is trying to kill off the famil....this is insane, but I love that. this chapter was really good!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'll have to go check which chapter this is now! LOL

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Date: 07/22/13 08:19 am Title: 15

Omg. I was liking the banter between AJ and Stacey but I hope she didn't get maimed or something....although I should expect this from you, Mare LOL

Author's Response:

Why does everyone always think I am going to kill or maime some of these poor laides....oh right! lol

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Date: 07/22/13 07:35 am Title: 14

Ooh Nick stumbled onto something....I hope that guy doesn't realize it's Nick's notebook or that Ariana saw him at the park. Yikes!

Author's Response:

Yikes, indeed! Thanks, Tracy! I always love checkig my mail and seeing a bunch of reviews from you! It makes me smile. :O)

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Date: 07/22/13 06:36 am Title: 13

AJs proposal was the most adorable and awkward thing ever LOL. I love AJ so much, he's my second favorite. I don't like whatever Charlie is up to one bit...

Author's Response:

Thanks for saying that! I wanted to make it as unique as possible and I figured foergtting the actual ring was a good way to do that! lol

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/13 09:41 pm Title: 5

Stupid kids, they are going to get in a whole lot of trouble mixing with the wrong crowd!

Aw and poor Nick, he must feel like no one wants him around.  Teenagers eh!



Author's Response:

LOL I know! Stupid teenagers!