Date: 04/07/06 09:00 pm Title: 12
I love you you always end chapter like that then say all sweetly, "Have a great weekend" *snorts* You, Mare, are EVIL!!! lol. I am glad that Kevin believes Nick. I am afraid for the poor lil blonde though. Charlie is up to no good and somebody is going to end up dead. And did AJ propose???? Awesome chapter! Things are realllly getting interesting now. Update next week? Pwease? lol.
Author's Response: LOL I will try to update this week :O) I pwomise!
Date: 04/04/06 01:13 am Title: 11
omg! i guessed something right for ONCE! woohoo!!! right at the end, when this mystery character was talking to Nadia's mom, I instantly remembered Charlie, lmao. So it's his sister who died. It's all connected! *rubs chin* how the plot thickens yo! and Nicky is in a huge trouble; wonder how he's going to get himself out of this and explain the truth to his family! How naive of me to actually celebrate when he joked with Brian and his dad about going out to buy ice cream! lol. And AJ dude....DO IT DO IT DO IT! lol
Author's Response: LOL aww yay Nancy but of course you guessed right because you are me dude! :OP
Date: 04/01/06 07:30 pm Title: 11
ooooo!!! That Charlie kid needs a good kick in the you know what!!!! How could he do that to my poor Nicky!! and I can't believe that Nadia was his sister. WOW what a suprise!!! I have a feeling that Nick is in a lot more trouble with Charlie now that Nadia is dead. update soon!! I just gotta see what will happen next. :)
Author's Response: Thanks Kim, hopefully this Friday :O)
Date: 03/31/06 06:26 pm Title: 11
Oh my god! I am so shocked...I can't believe it, they're related?? I knw I shouldn't be this shocked, I mean how many twists and turns has there been? But bloody hell!! And, Kevin Sr's going back to work!! Nick is gonna flip! I can't wait for the next chap!! Hurry!!!!! lol.
Author's Response: LOL Aww thanks Waj
Date: 03/31/06 05:19 pm Title: 11
Oh, how lovely. Now Charlie's gonna go after Nick just 'cause his brothers are F.B.I. Agents - &, well, soon to be his father again as well. If they're all such good F.B.I. Agents, then WHY can't they see people are after Nicky again & that Howie's STUPID wife is the cause of it all!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LOL I never said that were good FBI agents :OP
Date: 03/31/06 04:41 pm Title: 11
Holy hell....So Nadia is Charlie's sister? ANd her mother said that the POLICE killed her? Like fucking hell they did! That bitch needs locked up...she is a psychotic deamon with no feelings at all! And poor Nicky getting caught for something he didnt even do. The worst part is...Kevin Sr. will think he really did shop lift because he is always so troubled...but not a bad kid like everyone thinks! Poor lil guy. Loved the chapter though. Please update soon. This ending was not cool...very mean...grr!
Author's Response: Aww lol i'm a meanie, I can't help it. :O)
Date: 03/31/06 04:33 pm Title: 11
WOW what a big surpise Nadia was charlie sister still dont like him and how could to that to Nick, Charile needs a good kick in anyway keep up the good work
Author's Response: LOL yay I like surprises :O)
Date: 03/27/06 02:20 am Title: 10
yay!!! a new chapter!!! loved it! update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks Kim! :O)
Date: 03/25/06 05:41 am Title: 10
love the story please update ASAP!!!!
Author's Response: hopefully on Friday :O) thanks!
Date: 03/24/06 11:41 pm Title: 10
AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!AHHH!!!! THE TWO A'S ARE TROUBLE!!!! please let nicky not be so naive anymore, k? k lol.
Author's Response: Aww poor Anita lol
Date: 03/24/06 09:29 pm Title: 10
Great chapter as per usual, thank u mare. I had a huge argument with my mum, and reading this helped the anger to fizle away...better go and talk to her now! Thanx again!! :-)
Author's Response: Aww I hope you got everything straightened out. :O)
Date: 03/24/06 07:22 pm Title: 10
OMG....how could you leave off like that?!?!?! Holy hell!!! Ariana killed Nadia now? Stupid bitch. Howie needs to get the holy hell away from her! And Nicky is about to disappear again! I just have a feeling that he is about to get in to trouble . He's too damned naieve though and trusting. That tough front doenst mean shirt! HOpefully none of the RIchardsons die...*sniffles* Awesome chapter! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Aww thanks and sorry. Wow I must really be bead because when I was done with that chapter I actually said, "Yay for not leaving them with a cliffie this week* lmao
Date: 03/24/06 06:36 pm Title: 10
I so hate Anita, hope she get found out and that b/f of hers. Im so happy that Brian ok
Author's Response: Aww she might be completely clueless about him lol
Date: 03/24/06 05:01 pm Title: 10
Typos? What typos??? I honestly don't remebmer if I saw any-lol.
I *HATE* ANITA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! C'N I *PLESE* HELP CATCH HER & KICK HER SORRY ASS?????? PLEASE??????????
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Excellent lol i'm glad you didn't see any.
Why is everyone hating Anita suddenly?
Date: 03/12/06 05:54 pm Title: 9
Yeah sure.. A nice weekend after you left me with another mean cliffy.. :S
Author's Response: hey, it's my job. lol and I didn't even think it was that mean hehehe