[Report This]Date: 01/19/04 06:50 am Title: 25
great job with the chapter i really wanna see why these people are after the guys and whats gonna happen to them
[Report This]Date: 01/19/04 06:44 am Title: 24
omg that was a great chapter im feeling so bad for brian and aj and keivn and well all of them
[Report This]Date: 01/16/04 01:13 am Title: 24
hehe I hit dubmit too soon. The story is great those guys are getting into more amd more trouble. And they arent even causing it
[Report This]Date: 01/16/04 01:12 am Title: 24
Oh goodness those poor guys man this is getting worse and worse.
[Report This]Date: 12/16/03 04:23 am Title: 23
great job with the chapter!!!!! omg i can hardly wait to see what happens
[Report This]Date: 12/16/03 04:18 am Title: 23
I...think...i'm...hyper...ventilating... yes...that...is...definate...ly...happen...ing!lol This chapter is the best yet, seriously, please, please update soon I live for this kind of suspense.
[Report This]Date: 12/16/03 04:18 am Title: 23
I...think...i'm...hyper...ventilating... yes...that...is...definate...ly...happen...ing!lol This chapter is the best yet, seriously, please, please update soon I live for this kind of suspense.
[Report This]Date: 12/13/03 07:15 pm Title: 22
ooooooo great job please please please update soon
[Report This]Date: 12/13/03 08:22 am Title: 22
Oh My God, I'm flippin' out in anticipation here! (biting nails) Please update soon or my nails will end up like Howie's! Thanks
[Report This]Date: 12/08/03 04:27 am Title: 1
Anita reviewed this thing a million times lol. Mare,can you please update.We all know you have a life but it would be greatly appreciated.Please?Fo Aaron since it's his birthady.
Author's Response: LOL aww I doubt Aaron reads this stuff but I am in the middle of a brand new chapter now so look for an update in a few days :)
[Report This]Date: 12/04/03 02:10 am Title: 21
Oh my God, Oh my God! What the hell is gonna happen now?! You leave me hanging again but with a little hint that BRIAN is the next target. What am I supposed to do...no, I can't handle this, this torture is cruel, sick even! Update Soon please!
Author's Response: sorry, I don't mean to torture you. It's just the nature of this story ;)
Thanks for reading
[Report This]Date: 12/04/03 12:24 am Title: 21
great job update soon!
Author's Response: As always thanks Anita :) You're the best
[Report This]Date: 12/02/03 07:18 am Title: 20
you know thats just evil leaving all your fans hanging like that i mean hello we want to know what happened and then twisting it so the place was kvins condo and you still havent let up onto what these bad guys want or who they are. come on i want some answers! please update very very very soon
Author's Response: LOL! Wow Anita I came home and found that I had 23 e-mails and most of them were from your reviews of this story. I'm glad oyu are enjoying and I will try to update again relatively soon. Thanks for reading ;)
[Report This]Date: 12/02/03 07:13 am Title: 19
such a sad chapter wow i wonder whats gonna happen in this story
[Report This]Date: 12/02/03 07:00 am Title: 18
how could you leave the chapter hanging just like that thats evil
