[Report This]Date: 11/29/06 09:59 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven: Renee
So..finally something on Renee....aah, I've been waiting for it!!! Finally, finally I know her reasons why!!!! I see her anger, her frustration...I wished it had been shown earlier, though...then I would've known her reasons. But sometimes, reasons are hidden.
So she develops some feeling towards her demons? So sweet!!!!
Why doesn't she have to fight? Just walking over remains isn't fun....
''Cool vibes..don't need you to take awaywhy the hate...why don'tyou kill me? All we can do is fight and pray..all that I can see-shadows of my destiny'' a fitting song...by vanilla Ninja-''Cool Vibes''
Author's Response: I'm glad you're happy. ^_^ Well, I eluded to it earlier and felt perhaps it wasn't nearly enough.
Yes... She seems to be growing back into her heart.
Well... She is all about taking the easy way out.
Hmmmm... Sounds good. ^_^
Thanks again for the review dear.
[Report This]Date: 11/28/06 03:20 am Title: Chapter Forty-Two: Camaraderie
Hrm, you need better close to the satire :p I'm still unsure of what it is. So now they've decided to be a team huh?
Author's Response: I told you it would come at the end. :P ^_^
Well... Not Justin, but... perhaps they're learning there's a stronger power out there. ^_^
[Report This]Date: 11/27/06 12:38 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Two: Camaraderie
Eewww, wonder what's going to happen next!!
Author's Response: You'll see in good time! Nice to hear from you, sweetie. ^_^
[Report This]Date: 11/27/06 11:19 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Six: Pale Spirit
*smiles proudly* So I spared 5 minutes to read your chapter:)))...I see you certainly love those long, phylosophical intros. Leaves me the impression you have some Lacan books right on your desk.
I see the path you're going. Giving every demon his own fight. So this time, Alexander. He wasn't as impressive as Kevin or Howie...but it's understandable. He was in fear. ''Feel the dark is growing inside of me... there is no escape because my faith is horowing trough...don't feed my fear...'' this might be quite a good song to describe this chapter-Within Temptation-''It's the fear''
So well...this might be enough for this chapter...shall the light of Pandora shine over me :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the five minutes sweetie. No I don't, I just write what I feel like writing at the time.
Yup. :D Every demon must display his own power. Or his own weakness... Really, I'm just trying to give each one his own personal slot. ^_^ Well, I was really trying to show that not everyone is strong, some people have good intentions and aren't quite sure how to make them come through. ^_^ And that does sound like a good song for this chapter. I forget what I was listening to at the time... Probably some Japanese musid, knwoing the way I work. Haha.
I hope it does as well, and I hope you can spare me five more minutes soon. By the way, I forgot what the reading speed website was. Can I have the link again?
[Report This]Date: 11/14/06 11:50 pm Title: Chapter Forty-One: Wavering
Hrm... Renee is a strange one..
Author's Response: Yeah.......... But I lub her. ^_^
[Report This]Date: 11/13/06 02:13 am Title: Chapter Four: Breathless
whoohoo he let them all go! You did get commentary from me as I read these cause I was talking to you then I think.
Author's Response: Yeah.... I think I did get fly-by commentary....
Thanks for all the reviews Lore! ^_^
[Report This]Date: 11/13/06 02:12 am Title: Chapter Three: Within The Darkness
Aw the beginnings of love, at least it's better then, "wanna dance" "can I have your address" "I love you"
:-D
Author's Response: I was eleven!!!!! I can't help it. *sniff*
Oh well, at least it's better than getting made fun of for Nick and shoes..... ^_~
[Report This]Date: 11/13/06 02:12 am Title: Chapter Two: The Hidden Demon
ooooh reaction to Nick's name....ooooh
Author's Response: You're just grasping for things, aren't you? Hahaha.
[Report This]Date: 11/13/06 02:09 am Title: Chapter Forty: Sinful Savior
huh.... interesting conversation but I'm not sure I understood any "hidden" meanings. Excpet it just shows Justin's manipulation.
*taps foot* where's more you don't have long for the rest.
Author's Response: You mean where the satire comes from? ^_~ You'll see.... ^_~
Well..... I'll finish it soon! ^_^
[Report This]Date: 11/13/06 02:02 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Nine: Ruthless
Hrm interesting insight from the ruby demon...!
Author's Response: Yes.....
Way to et through all the large chapters! ^_^
[Report This]Date: 11/13/06 01:54 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight: Seer
Interesting the seer entering Brian.
Author's Response: Yeah.... So for five minutes, Brian was evil. Hahahahahahahahaha.
[Report This]Date: 11/13/06 12:19 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven: Renee
so they just get to walk through!! How unfair.. but of course how like Nsync... BSB paves the way and they reek the benefits! :-D
Author's Response: Hahaha.... I'm glad you noticed that similarity. ^_^
Can't wait to hear your thoughts on future chapters. ^_^
[Report This]Date: 11/13/06 12:09 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Six: Pale Spirit
Hrm interesting. Did I catch it right that he can change his body part into different things to fight with?
*nods* cool cool ... still waiting for more clues for the satire :p
Author's Response: Well... If you remembered earlier he copied Minako's form... He's a shapshfiting demon... ^_^
You'll see..... It won't be until the end! But you'll see. ^_^
[Report This]Date: 11/13/06 12:02 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five: Vine Wielder
so he can hurt people through hurting himself? Interesting. No more long paragraphs. :p
Author's Response: Well.... I was trying to tall you that I found a longer one a couple chapters after this one.... But yes.... Since he is a healing demon... He also the opposite to his enemies... ^_^
Yay! You finally got through it! ^_^
[Report This]Date: 11/11/06 05:31 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four: Weapons Master
God sounds like my Creator... creating playthings. LOL
Author's Response: Well.... now... This is a story all about creation and such... God... is interesting.... ^_^
