Date: 07/10/13 11:58 am Title: epilogue
:( I had meant to.finish this the other day, but with my nephew being born, power out at my house then work....been a crazy couple of days. So the other day I had typed up this long review only to have my phone erase it on me lol.
First off, Bravo. I am so glad I chose this story for a few reasons....one being that I always enjoy how you write Nick. He always seems just like I'd picture him to be....I also love how you write Kevin :) This story was really awesome and I related to Nick in some ways, but I liked Mike a lot. it was interesting to see Nick being the younger sibling for once instead of the oldest, and that was refreshing for me :)
Sorry to finish this but I am going.to start Protect and Serve today at some point.
Author's Response:
Aww and thanks so much for choosing this story. I a so glad you enjoyed it! Your comments have always been refreshing to read. I had a feeling you were talking about this one when you mentioned you had lost your long review on your phone lol that really sucks when that happens!! Also congrats on the nephew!! Hope you enjoy protect and Serve! :O)
Date: 07/08/13 04:23 pm Title: 40
Awww this was filled with warm fuzzies. The little sleep over and then Jane wanting to get to know Mike again.....awww. the part about putting bells or a leash on Nick kept cracking me up.
Author's Response:
Yay! I love warm fuzzy chapters after drama! I think the boy really does need a leash, I mean did you see he beached his boat? lmao
Date: 07/08/13 04:12 pm Title: 39
I am glad they don't seem too mad he ran away, hopefully things will be better between them and their dad won't bother them anymore. so sad I am almost done, I really enjoyed this story :)
Author's Response:
Aww I'm kind of sad you're almost done too! I am SO glad someone picked this story. This one was pretty much ignored I think because it was AU and mayb the overall subject didn't seeem interesting. I've always loved this one though so thank you foer visiting it for me!
Date: 07/08/13 03:04 pm Title: 38
I almost wanted to cry at this chapter. Poor Nick feeling like he has nobody and at the same time wanting to feel needed and loved. wanting to be normal and blend in but not being able to is the worst feeling....and on top of all that getting mugged :(
I always thought people at night on the subway or just in the city in general were crazy to begin with....I am so glad he found one person who was nice enough to help him out. Mike also made a great point....people need to be told they are loved sometimes too.
Author's Response:
I forgot he was mugged but now I remember this scene really clearly. Aww thanks! Random, I was attacked by a homeless person in Boston at around midnight by a subway. I was handing out cookies which was dumb to begin with and he started licking me and tried to pull me into the actual station. Luckily I was with people, but yes, crazy! And yes, everyone needs to hear they are loved. Thanks for your feedback. :O)
Date: 07/08/13 01:36 am Title: 37
I am glad Kevin knows Mike is innocent but now Nick's missing. :( poor kid can't catch a break.
Author's Response:
Aww, I know! Sorry Nick! lol
Date: 07/08/13 12:11 am Title: 36
Nick is about to do something really stupid again...his dad is an ass and I am really glad Nick figured things out and then kicked him out. Good for him.
Author's Response:
Uh oh I don't remember the stupid thing he does, but I'm sure you're probably right lol Thanks, Tracy!
Date: 07/08/13 12:00 am Title: 35
I feel bad for Mike, it sucks what their dad did and hopefully he can gain everyone's trust back.
Author's Response:
Yes, Mike has a hard go of it from pretty much every angle. :O( I feel the need to apologize to him.
Date: 07/04/13 12:45 pm Title: 34
Oh lord what a mess, what an asshole John is for framing Mike and causing so much drama. that scene was really good but hopefully Nick will realize it's the dad who is a jerk not his brother.
Author's Response:
John is a really idiot! Mike and Nick deserve much better (in real life too well, for Nick but I kind of wish he had a Mike in real life as well!) Thanks for all the reviews, Tracy! :O)
Date: 07/04/13 11:56 am Title: 33
Finally Nick notices his card is missing. I hate that everyone is so quick to suspect Mike but nobody stops to think about his dad being the one behind it....oye. Sad I am almost finished with this story.
Author's Response:
Aww I know! You've read a lot today! LOL all of you are moving so quick on my stories for this challenge, it makes me sad you'll all be done soon! LOL I know, poor Mike!
Date: 07/04/13 11:33 am Title: 32
I reallt want to slap Nick right now. This boy is so frustrating, and poie Kevin. He is just looking out for him, and he is treated like he's being an ass....which he was at first, but at least someone is looking out for Nick.
Author's Response:
I think this is how their chemistry really was when Nick was this age. I think he mistook a lot of Kevin's adivce and protection for being a jerk. Poor guy!
Date: 07/04/13 11:25 am Title: 31
Well Jane isn't winning any mother of the year awards in THIS chapter. Sheesh.
Author's Response:
Or real life anytime soon! LOL
Date: 07/04/13 11:16 am Title: 30
Mike and Melinda are cute together, its nice she's there for him and I am happy to see that Mike thinks his dad is up.to something. hopefully Nick wakes up soon and realizes mot everyone.is his friend.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I like Mike and Melinda too. And notice, she's still alive and not evil? That's a pretty big accomplishment right there!
Date: 07/04/13 11:11 am Title: 29
Nick is an idiot for putting his PIN on his card and not being more careful. he doesn't deserve this, but I hope he will learn a good leason when this is all over. Poor Nick just wants his family and John isa ass for using him. He makes Jane look like a saint.
Author's Response:
LOL I was dumb and used to do that because I had such a bad memory! I would get to the ATM and never remember my PIN. Of course I don't do that anymore but yes, stupid thing to do!
Date: 07/04/13 11:03 am Title: 27
I feel like this date with the fan was pretty accurate, him not being able to really.get to know someone because of who he is. I feel bad for the boys in real life for that too, cause it's so true.
Author's Response:
oh okay, now I remember what you're talking about and yes, I feel bad for them and for any celeb for that matter when it comes to this stuff. I would always be thinking they were only with me because I was famous.
Date: 07/04/13 10:56 am Title: 26
Poor Nick again now ge gas to take this girl out ....lmao talk about awkward. Here comes John to cause more trouble :/
Author's Response:
I don't remember a girl lol I need to borrow some of Howie's Ginko Biloba!
