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Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/13 10:52 am Title: 25

I never liked Carson Daly...he was always such a toolbag. You were pretty accurate with that description lol. John is....sigh. I hope he gets caught soon because Nick and Mike do nit deserve this at all.

Author's Response:

I didn't realize Carson was in this one as well. I must really not like him very much lol He is a huge tool!

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Date: 07/04/13 10:36 am Title: 24

Nick's mom had the reaction I thought she would. No wonder Nick is drawn to his dad and Mike. All he wants is someone to care about him.

Author's Response:

Aww, that is so sad and insightful. :O(

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/13 10:25 am Title: 23

I really liked Nick and Mikes conversation in this chapter and Nick saying they could switch places then getting the story wrong. I always enjoy how you write Nick, he seems so real to me :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for saying that! I try to channel my inner Nick as best as I can. Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't lol Thanks again, Tracy!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/13 10:16 am Title: 22

I knew it. Poor Nick sleeping and not having a clue he was just taken advantage of by his own dad. What a jerk this guy is....he seems like he is a good manipulator....no wonder he and Jane wete together lol

Author's Response:

Yeah, exactly! Two peas in a pod! LOL He is a total jerk! :O/

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/13 10:11 am Title: 21

Ohhh boy. It's really good Nick went to find him and nice of Melinda to help him. I think in real life Nick thinks about what it would be like to just sit and watch the people pass by, instead of constantly having to be somewhere. I really don't like John already, Nick shoukd have taken someone with him.

Author's Response:

I agree with you! I think sometimes he wants nothing more than to just be a normal guy and do normal guy things like being able to sit back and relax. Thanks, Tracy!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/13 09:35 am Title: 20

Oh no. See I know it was wrong of Mike to show up high, but it was wrong of Brian and Kevin to behave like that and sneak around, I dont blame Nick for being mad, the way everyone is acting must be really confusing for him.

Author's Response:

I don't remember what happened lol but my guess is there was some overeeacting? Thanks for reading and all your comments. It was fun to wake up and see all these reviews in my inbox! :O)

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/13 09:17 am Title: 19

aww. The two of them talking all night and everything was very cute. I like that the other guys are so supportive and want to meet Mike, but it looks like Kevin is still waiting to prove him wrong. Also looks like John is about to mess it all up for him.

Author's Response:

Sometimes you need a little warm and fuzzy :O) before the gray comes lol

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/13 09:09 am Title: 18

I am glad Nick told Kevin everything and they aren't fighting anymore, but I know Nick will regret talking to his dad. It makes me sick you cannot trust your own family, I identified with Mike and the money jar because I had one to save cruise money in. I was do worried it would get stolen I'd move it to a new place every night. Reading on...

Author's Response:

Aww, I never have enough money to put it in a jar but I've always loved the idea of one! I'd be too afriad I'd forget where I put it though lol

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/13 08:52 am Title: 17

John is definitely up to something....and now Nick thinks Mike was lying, poor kid. As if he isn't confused enough already now he is hearing Mike doesn't have a brother. The part at the end where he went to Kevin made me smile, hopefully things will be looking up.

Author's Response:

I know, I really felt bad for Nick while writing this. I kept thinking about how he used to be back then and how confused and hurt he would be when all this was going on. Yay to Kevin and Nick moments! Thanks, Tracy!

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Date: 06/24/13 06:46 am Title: 16

I already do not like John. he seems like the type who will use Nick when he finds out about him, or use his fame. I think Kevin is being kind of an ass as well, he's not helping Nick much by being so douchey. Hopefully things will look up soon.

Author's Response:

Yeah, John is very much like a male Jane only even sketchier if that's possible lol

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/13 11:16 am Title: 15

I feel bad for Mike now in this chapter. He wants to get to.know Nick but Nick's life seems so hectic its hard to spend time together. I feel that's how things are in real life too.

Author's Response:

I agree! I bet it's hard for them to ever meet new people, let alone bond with them! Thanks, Tracy!

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Date: 06/22/13 09:39 am Title: 14

I kinda really loved seeing Nick go all pissy on Kevin and punching him in this chapter. I cracked up at the visual of Kevin pinning him actually. I think Kevin is being hard on him to prove a point, I love him in this story.

Author's Response:

LOL We all knew that was coming. Nick had to lose his temper and of course Kevin would bear the brunt of it. I have a feeling Mr. Richardson did his fair amount of pinning Nick against walls.

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Date: 06/21/13 11:12 am Title: 13

Oh Nickolas. See I think it is kind of shady that they were telling him to be careful and all that, then all of a sudden it turned into "don't read into it". I get they were trying to be supportive but poor Nick lol. No wonder the kid was mad.

I also love the little description of NYC streets and where Mike lives, it was pretty visual to me.

Author's Response:

Visual is always good! Thanks, Tracy! I agree they were kind of shady and annoying, like the kid isn't confused enough? lol

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Date: 06/21/13 10:06 am Title: 12

Kevin would have intimidated the hell out of me if I was Mike. I just seehim that way in real life too for some reason....like the dad.

Author's Response:

He intimidates the crap out of me too. He just has that way about him I think. Thanks again, Tracy!

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Date: 06/21/13 09:32 am Title: 11

The two of them reminiscing was very cute, I loved the but about Nick wearing a dump truck on his head and running through the house naked. I can totally picture him doing that as a child.

Author's Response:

I used to do that when I was litle. I had a dump truck for whatever reason and used to run around the house with it on my head. Not naked though. LOL