Date: 06/21/13 09:24 am Title: 10
Honestly I do not blame the guys for reacting the way they did. It is nice that they look out for him and I think Nick was a bit hasty in telling them off, although I expect this since he's a teenager lol. Reading on....
Author's Response:
I can also see Nick being like that in real life, just based on what I have seen in interviews when he was that age lol he could be kind of jerkish.
Date: 06/21/13 08:36 am Title: 9
Poor Nick, I don't blame him for thinking Mike was after money or to use him....but did Mike really expect to be welcomed by Nick with open arms? I can only imagine what Kevin is gonna say about him letting him up to his room....because it seems to me Nick is too trusting. I have a feeling it will bite him in the butt later.
Author's Response:
I think Mike has a little bit of that naitivity that Nick does and I d think Nick is to trusting, I think he is in real life as well. Thanks, Tracy!
Date: 06/06/13 11:16 am Title: 8
It got a little confusing with the amount of POV changes but I managed to follow. I somehow don't think Nick is gonna take to him saying that he is his brother like this...but we'll see.
Author's Response:
Ah, I don't remember this chapter but I do remember at some point having a heck of a time trying to figure out the best way to reveal the brother thing. Maybe this was the chapter? lol I might have to read it. Good lord if I used Nick's POV and then Mike's POV before they spoke I might pokje my own eyes out with a spork though. Maybe I won't read it. LOL
Date: 06/06/13 11:07 am Title: 7
Awww Nick :( Jane is a jerk...and poor Nick thinks she doesn't care. I really like that Kevin takes care of him....I miss reading this kind of stuff cause of their relationship. I missed those two.
Hopefully Mike gets to talk to Nick, I think Nick needs something positive right now..
Author's Response:
You gotta love Nick and Kevin together. I have really missed that relationship too. I wish more people would write Nick and Kevin stories although now I feel like there has been a shift to Nick and Howie but I'd still like to think Kevin is as big brotherly as before. Heck I wouldn't mind reading a Nick, Kevin and Howie fanfic. *sigh* I just babbled lol sorry about that. Jane is a jerk lol
Date: 06/06/13 10:56 am Title: 6
I actually like Melinda, she's a good friend for helping Mike connect with Nick. I had to laugh at the part where Nick was saying he thinks the girls regret asiking for a Nick/Brian sandwich. I know when I met them I did regret ut LOL
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like Melinda! To this day, I think she might be the only female character I've written that hasn't turned out evil or dead! LOL
Date: 06/06/13 10:43 am Title: 5
Poor Mike. I feel bad that he finally realizes who Nick is....only to find his mother literally cut him from their lives. That's so sad.
Author's Response:
The sad part is, if Mike were a real person, I could see her doing that to him. :-/
Date: 06/06/13 10:40 am Title: 4
See this is what I meant in the last chapter....Jane parading Nick around....and I was pleased to see him kind of tell her off about it. There are some grammar/spelling errors but since this is an old story...I don't mind them.
Author's Response:
Yeah, there will probably be more mistakes in this one then some of the others you are used to reading. It took a while for me to get into my writing flow and back into the world of good grammar, punctuation etc... I'm surprised about the spelling though. I'm usually pretty good with that. I hate Jane! I hated the way she treated her son and sometimes I fear I see those same qualites in Leighanne! Random thought lol
Date: 06/06/13 10:33 am Title: 3
cute chapter...I feel bad that Mike ended up with this lifestyle because of his father...I also feel bad that Nick got paraded around by his mother in this way.
I love that this is classic writing for you, the other boys acting as a family and support for Nick when it seems that his own parents don't care as much. These kind of fics are my favorite :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, Tracy! Yes this was back in the day where my bromance meter was on onver the top high at times lol
Date: 05/31/13 04:17 pm Title: 2
Ooh they finally met!!! I will agree that all that screaming is annoying lol I can imagine how it was back in the day. This is getting more interesting as I read, especially since I can't wait for when Nick figures out the guy he gave that CD to.is his brother.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Tracy! I loved writing that first interaction between the brothers. :O)
Date: 05/28/13 10:09 am Title: 1
I miss Virgin Megastore and TRL even though Carson was a toolbag. I just had such a nostalgia trip reading this. I can't wait to see what happens when Nick sees Mike again...
PS: i missed reading stories from when the boys were younger....glad I chose this :)
Author's Response:
Shows you how long ago I actually wrote it because it wasn't a back in the day fic but a current one. LOL Also it was way before the time that Chaos added the respond to review option. I almost want to go back to all these old reviews and respond but that would probably be mega weird and random lmao Thanks, Tracy!
Date: 05/26/13 02:33 pm Title: prologue
Really interesting first chapter, Mare. Looking forward to reading this one!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Tracy!
[Report This]Date: 04/30/06 04:31 am Title: epilogue
i just read this story in two days....wow! i loved it!
[Report This]Date: 05/14/05 09:33 am Title: epilogue
after reading the last words, including the series of gratitude to some people, o could say that this is like a movie and i'm hooked since the beginning to end. i love the story..i love the plot...i love the flow of the story..i love the flow of the characters..still, i'm your fan :D :D
[Report This]Date: 03/24/04 04:02 am Title: epilogue
great story sorry to see it come to an end hope you write another soon besides lions den!
[Report This]Date: 03/22/04 01:08 am Title: epilogue
Such a happy and awesome ending! I'm so sad that it ended though. I was hoping the story would go on forever! I totally loved it! Anyways, it's great that in the end, Jane and Mike accepted one another and Nick forgave her and her him. I look forward to reading future stories from you!!!!v This one was truly amazing!
